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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 26 Nov 2022 2:50 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Its certainly...interesting. To be completely honest with you, it reads a bit awkward. Snape just kidnaps this kid because he has a scar... and then Harry just... okays it? Just because the guy claims he knew Harrys parents. I just would think a Harry who has been through all he has AND been roughing it on the streets for months now... i just think he would be at least a little more wary
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 21 May 2017 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Unusual good start to the story thank you
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 03 Apr 2012 11:30 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this. Especially how Harry almost kicks Sev in the balls :) Made me smile. I'm interested to see where this goes...
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 10 Jul 2008 8:54 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh wow
    this is good
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow I had no idea you'd updated when I started rereading this. What a treat!

    This was a great chapter, everyone is so protective of Harry.

    I can't wait to see what happens when Harry or Snape finally runs into Sirius.

    You've written a great story, you should be so proud.

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 7:11 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    So I guess that Dursley's were slightly better...

    Is this Sirius making his first appearance? Is he the stray dog and the growl before the bus takes of?

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 6:59 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    It's so interesting to see Ron instead of Ginny in all of this.

    It's always interesting to think about how much would change if Harry hadn't become Ron's friend immediately as he did in the Philosopher's Stone.

    Love it!

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    How on earth can Harry have had all this done to him and still 'play pretend' like a little child. It's unbelievable.

     He sure is strong!

    Another great chapter!

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I'm glad you didn't just have Harry give in and admit to Hermione and Neville what was going on when they suspected something. A lot of authors do that and it just doesn't fit in with his character beforehand.

    I'm glad they're finally doing something about it!

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 6:26 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love this bit:

    "Snape nodded, his throat too tight to speak.

    If the boy was hurt, he would never forgive himself."

    It would be such a hard situation to be in. And then the blizzard! Argh!


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