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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's so sad that Harry is worried about doing wrong by Snape when all Snape is trying to do is help him. In his own unique way of course!
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 5:42 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That's a good chapter.

    Just because I hate when I reread things and find something wrong, there is a couple of typos in this paragraph I noticed.

    “Oh, and Harry—Neville Longbottom gave this to my, to give to you. He thought it might make you feel better.”

    I think its supposed to be 'me' instead of 'my'.

    That bit about Severus stopping Harry from going over the cliff and admitting that he likes him gets me everytime. Fantastic!

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I'm going to start crying soon.

     The detail you can give to one conversation without it feeling drawn out is wonderful.

    I am in awe.

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 4:40 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Snape smelled like his cupboard? And that was comforting?

    My heart just aches for those two in your story.

     I'm just rereading and thought you deserve more reviews. Your story is spectacular and still so in character.

     I shall keep going now...

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 23 Sep 2006 7:01 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My eyes are slighltly teary as I finish this story.  Your review says it's finished, but it begs for more.  Did Snape get his answer?  Does he know why Harry hasn't turned out badly?  After all, that was why he wanted to talk to Harry, to find out how he avoided becoming what Snape remembers he himself became.  At first I thought the answer was no, he hasn't gotten his answer, but after thinking about it I've changed my mind.  He has it.  The Dursley's were never Harry's parents.  He had parents who loved him if only for a little while, and they fueled his fantasy that he was still lovable.  Snape had parents so he had no fantasy.  If only reality could work like that.  Anyway, this was short and powerful--it made an impression on me.  What will happen next in this AU I wonder????  Thanks for sharing your work!
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 22 Sep 2006 1:09 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    fantasitc beginning, looking forward to more
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 22 Sep 2006 6:06 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful beginning, I'm quite interested in seeing where you go from here.

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