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Reviews For Rules of the Game
oh! poor little harry! i just found this story and am super excited to be reading it, i usually just comment on the end, but had to add something here. 1) i love this!! 2) you have a couple double s's and double o's in this chapter, which is no biggie, just typo's...but one turns as into ass... i'm off to read more! yay! ~violet
It's really good so far. How original, an 11-year-old runaway Harry... As far as spelling errors they're ignorable. One grammar error that keeps popping up does annoy me, though: it's the possessive apostrophe. You switch "plural" and "possessive"... Okay: so when the Slytherin prefects all dump Percy's banner in the flames, it shouldn't be the Slytherin prefect's doing it. It's just more than one prefect - so "prefects". Apostrophe-s is possessive, meaning belonging-to-them... for instance, "Harry's smile", or the smile that belongs to Harry. Other than as a conjunction with is or was, ("Harry's coming, I promise") that's the only time you use apostrophe-s. Thanks! Like you say, gr/sp errors sort of take me out of the story. They're jarring. I'm enjoying it immensely so far! -K |
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