I forgot to mention how I loved how you structured the scenes around each of the young Gryffindors, their Christmas and what they were about to do. It was a very interesting form to read and done well. I really liked it as a rare change.

I also LOVED Harry's little daydreams. it was so precious, both because of what it was and also how you wrote it so simply with Harry's childish wishes and desiring heart. Lovely. Precious. I never get to read something so simple and lovely, at least not like that. Great job and thank you so much. :)