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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 23: Down The Rabbit Hole Again 09 Oct 2006 2:16 pm
Reviewer: grumpygrim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    <3
Title: Chapter 23: Down The Rabbit Hole Again 09 Oct 2006 10:19 am
Reviewer: MinervaGranger (Signed) [Report This]
    You need to not leave me hanging like that. Thanks for the great new chapter. Now, as always, UPDATE
Title: Chapter 23: Down The Rabbit Hole Again 09 Oct 2006 7:18 am
Reviewer: Banner (Signed) [Report This]
    That scene with the basilisk is one of my favorites. Good job - you kept it exciting and fun.
Title: Chapter 23: Down The Rabbit Hole Again 09 Oct 2006 5:08 am
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG!!!! Please update soon!! I love your story!! You update quickly, and its always interesting!!
Title: Chapter 22: This Is Not Good 09 Oct 2006 1:22 am
Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Your story's great!!! Update asap!!!!

Title: Chapter 22: This Is Not Good 08 Oct 2006 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my, poor Ron.  Great chapter
Title: Chapter 22: This Is Not Good 08 Oct 2006 7:05 pm
Reviewer: Banner (Signed) [Report This]

    I just found this story, and it's great! You're doing a wonderful job presenting the ugly facts about abuse, and how poorly it can be handled...

Title: Chapter 12: Hospital Wings and Holidays 08 Oct 2006 1:07 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    I love, love, love your little Harry. He's so sweet, but easily hurt and hopeful too. I love the way you portray him and you express his emotions not only in his head, but by his actions too, like going pink and playing with his blankets. It was so heartbreaking how Harry thought at first he would head home because he was expelled but then it was only for summer break, yay! So sad the way he had to say goodbye to "everything he loved". Lovely part.

    I LOVED the end part when Snape went back and looked in the Mirror Erised. :*) Great! Thanks for sharing! 

Title: Chapter 13: Going To Be A Long Summer 07 Oct 2006 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Poor Harry. I was really scared for him, I can't believe he went along with going back! Delusional kid. :( But I guess kids are like that. I guess he's not too bad off if he managed to make it all the way to Neville's, but still.

    I love how in the begining of this chapter he stopped and noticed that woman and her son, how they gave her some money. That was great.

    I like Hermione's parents and good job in keeping their names canon. :) 

Title: Chapter 14: The Best Summer Ever 07 Oct 2006 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor, poor Harry! A broken arm is terrible, but add on to the fact of how he got it, and then how he just got left again! Oh poor guy. I'm so glad that he had some place to go this time!! you managed to get and describe the awkwardness everyone was in very well, not knowing really but the suspicions of what's going on. I like how Neville told Harry that he feel once too, but out a window. Yeah that takes the cake, but poor Neville. Poor Ron too!

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