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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Great updates. I love watching Harry and Snape grow together, and Hermione and Neville are developing as more than the "also-ran" and the "brain." This is fun. Thank you.
Wow I had no idea you'd updated when I started rereading this. What a treat! This was a great chapter, everyone is so protective of Harry. I can't wait to see what happens when Harry or Snape finally runs into Sirius. You've written a great story, you should be so proud.
So I guess that Dursley's were slightly better... Is this Sirius making his first appearance? Is he the stray dog and the growl before the bus takes of?
It's so interesting to see Ron instead of Ginny in all of this. It's always interesting to think about how much would change if Harry hadn't become Ron's friend immediately as he did in the Philosopher's Stone. Love it!
How on earth can Harry have had all this done to him and still 'play pretend' like a little child. It's unbelievable. He sure is strong! Another great chapter!
I'm glad you didn't just have Harry give in and admit to Hermione and Neville what was going on when they suspected something. A lot of authors do that and it just doesn't fit in with his character beforehand. I'm glad they're finally doing something about it!
I love this bit: "Snape nodded, his throat too tight to speak. It would be such a hard situation to be in. And then the blizzard! Argh!
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