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Reviews For Rules of the Game
Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 5:42 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That's a good chapter.

    Just because I hate when I reread things and find something wrong, there is a couple of typos in this paragraph I noticed.

    “Oh, and Harry—Neville Longbottom gave this to my, to give to you. He thought it might make you feel better.”

    I think its supposed to be 'me' instead of 'my'.

    That bit about Severus stopping Harry from going over the cliff and admitting that he likes him gets me everytime. Fantastic!

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I'm going to start crying soon.

     The detail you can give to one conversation without it feeling drawn out is wonderful.

    I am in awe.

Title: Chapter 1: Rules Broken 05 Nov 2006 4:40 pm
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Snape smelled like his cupboard? And that was comforting?

    My heart just aches for those two in your story.

     I'm just rereading and thought you deserve more reviews. Your story is spectacular and still so in character.

     I shall keep going now...

Title: Chapter 29: Talks, Treats, and Terrors 31 Oct 2006 6:53 am
Reviewer: blue artemis (Signed) [Report This]
    I just found this story, and I have to tell you, It is amazing. I can't wait for more.
Title: Chapter 29: Talks, Treats, and Terrors 24 Oct 2006 9:47 am
Reviewer: Abby Jack (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Lovely. I'm worried now, since you're following canon to an extent, how the showdown with Sirius Remus and Severus will go. Oooh, love the story though.
Title: Chapter 29: Talks, Treats, and Terrors 24 Oct 2006 8:02 am
Reviewer: Megsy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow, that's all I can say. Wow.

     I read this whole thing in one sitting which was very bad, I should have been sleeping. Oh well, it was worth it.

    Yous started with an interesting concept and you have followed it through so well. You've managed to keep it realistic but still dramatic. I love it and you should be so proud. Well done!

Title: Chapter 29: Talks, Treats, and Terrors 21 Oct 2006 5:28 pm
Reviewer: Banner (Signed) [Report This]
    This view of Lupin is so different from the way I'm used to thinking of him. Really interesting character development.
Title: Chapter 28: Boggarts and Dementors 18 Oct 2006 7:57 pm
Reviewer: Vanaondoiel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow!!! 

    This sotory is really amaizing!  It has kept me on the edge of my seat the entire way!  Please continue soon!

    Blessings and Light,

    Vanaondoiel 

Title: Chapter 28: Boggarts and Dementors 17 Oct 2006 8:17 am
Reviewer: MinervaGranger (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, that was NOT the way that was supposed to go. Nicely written, though.
Title: Chapter 28: Boggarts and Dementors 15 Oct 2006 7:28 am
Reviewer: Athenea (Signed) [Report This]
    I haven't commented on this story yet so I thought I would stop lurking to tell you how much I am enjoying it. I like the developing relationship you have between Harry and Snape and I can't wait to see how it will play out with Lupin and Sirius in the future. Thanks for updating so frequently.

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