| Title: Guess Who's back
| 01 Mar 2007 4:04 am
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| Reviewer: None (Anonymous)
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This is a really good story. Pleas update soon!
| Title: Guess Who's back
| 22 Feb 2007 3:30 am
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| Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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This Rocks!!!!
I don't really read uncompleated stories but it looked kinda intresting so i thought what the hell i'll read it any way and i love it so far and can't wait for another update.
*wink wink-nudge nudge*
Luv Lippy
Second time I read it and it's still great. XD Keep up the excellent work.
| Title: Never Cross a Slytherin
| 20 Feb 2007 8:51 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Grimwauld should be Grimmauld, and literate should be articulate (as Harry is speaking and not writing). You need a beta!
Snape having Harry alone in the same house as he is, warded to the nines, sounds like a great Death Eater opportunity to me. What's to prevent Snape from giving Harry to the DEs? I don't think Snape *would*, mind you, because I think he's loyal to Dumbledore; what I mean is that from the perspective of the DEs, this is the perfect opportunity for Snape to kill Harry off. One would think that Draco would report this to his father and there would be Trouble. I'm liking your setup, though. :) I do sort of wonder what you believe Draco's loyalties to be, however.
But maybe you like Draco and he is firmly on Dumbledore's side? I like him. :)
-K
| Title: An Abnormally Large Nose
| 20 Feb 2007 8:35 am
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| Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed)
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Hmm. Well, you've got the "Luminos" here. That should be Lumos. You've also got "vindicated" used in an odd way. In the words of Inigo Montoya: "That word! I do not think it means what you think it means." Maybe you were looking for "vindictive"? Hmm. Grammar errors and misspellings distract me from any potential awesomeness...
Okay, *wow*. You've put together the first, ONLY realistic scene of a beating I've ever seen done in fandom. Honestly, I don't even read these stories anymore - or not usually, anyway - because Harry sits there and takes the beating, and phases out because he's somehow "used" to the blows.
Your story is different. Harry remains in character instead of cowering in a corner (this thoughts about attempting to reach his wand are well-done). The first blow comes so suddenly that he doesn't know he's been hit until he hits the floor - gut-jarringly realistic, there. And there's a horrible pain in his knee before it goes somewhat numb. You seem to actually know what you're talking about. Lo and behold!
;)
-K
Wow you updated... did you ever send me this chappy? Oh great update btw.
| Title: Guess Who's back
| 20 Feb 2007 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: acacia59601 (Anonymous)
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OMG that was absolutly great!!!! Snape's going to pitch a fit!!
| Title: Changes and Chances
| 04 Feb 2007 4:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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: ))))))))))))))))))))) I just loveeeeeeeeeee that story! You probably wouldn't write a boring story even if you really tried! Looking forward for and update!
I really, really, really liked this chapter. And I enjoyed the cliffhanger. I hope you do update soon. Crabby Snape/ Additude Harry are the best. Your characterisation is realistic with your creative dialogue.
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