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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Good line, I lked it, something I could easily imagine Harry doing! Author's Response: I liked that line myself, lol! I'm glad you enjoyed it as well :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I did know that, but never quite got around to fixing it.
What a great idea! If only... Author's Response: Heh, no kidding...I wish!
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 14 is up now :)
You correctly spelled "vial" twice, but the first time you used it it is "vile." Maybe it tastes really bad! ;-) Author's Response: Hahaha oops. I need to go back and correct that spelling error. As for hints about Harry's attack, I'm pretty sure I dropped that same bit of info when Harry was having his nightmare.
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Author's Response: Yep, Snape is definitely aware. He discovers the abuse at the very end of Chapter 1. I'm actually pretty glad for this chapter, too :)
Ah well. I'll just have to leave another 1. That's all there is to it! Tee hee. Sevy's getting more and more parental! *grins* He'll make a great daddy. Don't give up little Harry!! Bond with the 'big scary' Potions Master! ^v^ I was wondering how Harry was supposed to 'say' the pasword. Didn't come up with an answer either. . . sure glad you did. Lol Xx Author's Response: Anyone who comes back to re-review automatically is awesome. Thank you. Anyway, Harry doesn’t quite realize what he’s doing, but he certainly is persistent in his efforts to get Snape to care about him. Yeah, the question of the password woke me up in the middle of the night after I had posted. Hence, this chapter.
GAH THAT BIT IS SO CUTE. And completely perfect XD And on to more important things: SNAPEY YOU ARE MELTING! You are like a continental shift - you start off as an island and then BAM you're part of the continent. Get used to it, Snapey - I have this feeling that you'll be part of the continent the rest of your life XD Author's Response: XD. I’m trying to make him melt slowly, but with Harry being so damned cute he’s having a hard time resisting. And I’m secretly pleased (heh) with the way the ‘please’ sections worked out. So I’m really glad you like that one.
Great chapter, I'm glad Severus didn't simply give Harry a calming draught, that annoys me to no end in some stories. It just treats the symptoms people! Severus you old softie, bending to the magic word! It's nice for them to spend the holidays together. The little mention of a boy calling him 'pretty' is worrying. I assume this is reference to his attack at Hogwarts. I might need to reread but I don't recall it being mentioned before. Very interesting. Anyway, best of luck with your writing and I hope you have a good week! Author's Response: As far as I'm aware not a single person pointed it out. Lucky me! The "pretty" is meant to be worrying, and it certainly freaked out Harry! And yes, it's from the attack.
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