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Reviews For Reading the Signs
Title: Chapter 13 14 Jun 2008 1:20 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    He couldn’t help himself, he clutched at the man’s hand as if he could squeeze human compassion from it like an orange.
    Good line, I lked it, something I could easily imagine Harry doing!

    Author's Response: I liked that line myself, lol!  I'm glad you enjoyed it as well :)
Title: Chapter 13 27 May 2008 7:11 pm
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    You mis-typed the wrong homonym: "'Come.' He was guided to the footstool and handed a VILE" should be amended.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I did know that, but never quite got around to fixing it.
Title: Chapter 13 16 May 2008 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    I keep saying Snape is sweet and expect to turn around and find him looking at me with his eyebrow arched!
Title: Chapter 13 02 Dec 2007 8:10 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    even if the hat had made his hair even messier than usually. Ron had nearly died laughing. Harry wondered if there was such a thing as an anti-static charm.

    What a great idea! If only...

    Author's Response: Heh, no kidding...I wish!
Title: Chapter 13 15 Sep 2007 4:44 pm
Reviewer: morgana1616 (Signed) [Report This]
    This last chapter was amazing. I loved the entire thing!!!!! I cannot wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Chapter 14 is up now :)
Title: Chapter 13 12 Sep 2007 12:07 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    You're right! I never noticed that plot hole. But it just allowed you to write this beautiful piece of angst. And are you giving a hint at an aspect of Harry's attack that wasn't clear before?

    You correctly spelled "vial" twice, but the first time you used it it is "vile." Maybe it tastes really bad! ;-)

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha oops.  I need to go back and correct that spelling error.  As for hints about Harry's attack, I'm pretty sure I dropped that same bit of info when Harry was having his nightmare.

     

    Thanks for the review :)

Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved this chapter! I actually didn't catch the plot hole, but I'm glad you added this chapter, because it was really lovely. At this point, is Snape aware of Vernon's abuse towards Harry? He didn't seem surprised, and I couldn't remember if Harry had told him or not. Anyway, excellent chapter. I really enjoyed it :)

    Author's Response:

    Yep, Snape is definitely aware.  He discovers the abuse at the very end of Chapter 1.

    I'm actually pretty glad for this chapter, too :)

Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 4:45 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    I could have sworn blind that I reviewd this chapter earlier. . . but it's nowwhere to be seen O_o

    Ah well. I'll just have to leave another 1. That's all there is to it!

    Tee hee. Sevy's getting more and more parental! *grins* He'll make a great daddy. Don't give up little Harry!! Bond with the 'big scary' Potions Master! ^v^
    I was wondering how Harry was supposed to 'say' the pasword. Didn't come up with an answer either. . . sure glad you did. Lol Xx

    Author's Response: Anyone who comes back to re-review automatically is awesome. Thank you. Anyway, Harry doesn’t quite realize what he’s doing, but he certainly is persistent in his efforts to get Snape to care about him. Yeah, the question of the password woke me up in the middle of the night after I had posted. Hence, this chapter.
Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 1:45 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    "But it was still ‘please’, and Harry still secretly thought of it as ‘the magic word’. Which was funny now that he knew so many real ones. But this had been the first, and he was powerless against it. And so he wrote."

    GAH THAT BIT IS SO CUTE. And completely perfect XD

    And on to more important things: SNAPEY YOU ARE MELTING! You are like a continental shift - you start off as an island and then BAM you're part of the continent. Get used to it, Snapey - I have this feeling that you'll be part of the continent the rest of your life XD

    Author's Response: XD.  I’m trying to make him melt slowly, but with Harry being so damned cute he’s having a hard time resisting.  And I’m secretly pleased (heh) with the way the ‘please’ sections worked out.  So I’m really glad you like that one.
Title: Chapter 13 10 Sep 2007 10:08 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe that I didn't think of Harry not being able to verbally say the password! That was quite funny really, I wonder if anyone did notice. I sure didn't.

    Great chapter, I'm glad Severus didn't simply give Harry a calming draught, that annoys me to no end in some stories. It just treats the symptoms people!

    Severus you old softie, bending to the magic word! It's nice for them to spend the holidays together. The little mention of a boy calling him 'pretty' is worrying. I assume this is reference to his attack at Hogwarts. I might need to reread but I don't recall it being mentioned before. Very interesting.

    Anyway, best of luck with your writing and I hope you have a good week!

    Author's Response:

    As far as I'm aware not a single person pointed it out.  Lucky me!

    The "pretty" is meant to be worrying, and it certainly freaked out Harry!  And yes, it's from the attack.

     

    Thanks for the review!


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