Lovely chapter. Snape gagging on pizza was hilarious, and I enjoyed him seeing how positively Slytherin Harry can be.
Love the dialogue very natural thank you
"realizing he wasn't a boy, he was just a scar and a prophecy."
Oh, the pathos. Such beautiful pathos.
Snape being nice to Harry for the first time, ever.
*sniff*
"realizing he wasn't a boy, he was just a scar and a prophecy."
Oh, the pathos. Such beautiful pathos.
Snape being nice to Harry for the first time, ever.
*sniff*
AWW I really liked this. Snapey sitting up to watch over Harry, yes Harry! He reall called hiim Harry! Again, AWW! Loved it!
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| 24 Apr 2011 8:47 pm
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Great chapter. My username is summer, and I could have sworn I was logged in. Oh, yeah, the computer shut down and I came back on. Next reveiw I'll log on. Sweet cahpter! kEEP IT UP! I honestly thought that Vernon was tricking Harry, but I guess not. Bye!
Very interesting chapter; I love the insights into Snape's mindset and I think you're portraying Harry really well
Lovely chapter, this. I always enjoy watching Severus and Harry start to work things out together. Good job.
Yay! I love Snape's reactions to Harry's home life! ^^
I like how early on you show how Snape supports Harry (such as physically in the hospital). And I noticed the first "breathe"... which might not actually be the first I don't know... anyway, it's surprising how much that one word brings to mind. All the support and strength Snape later gives to Harry.
Also, I liked how you had the pizza during the conversation between Snape and Harry. They were talking about a serious subject that could quickly turn mushy or cheezy... but with the humor of Snape grimacing with each bite of pizza. I think that really balanced out the scene.
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