I love your Snape’s sardonic verbiage. It’s perfect and utterly hilarious at times.
Title: Obliviate
| 15 Feb 2018 9:41 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love your dialogue and the story thank you
Ooh, nice! Great chapter! *grin*
Title: Obliviate
| 16 Apr 2007 4:12 am
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Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous)
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""You need to get out of the dungeons more," Harry told him."
Priceless, absolutely priceless. :D
I love your Snape. LIke how he shows off, pretending that he really is going to Obliviate Hermione. Or how he remarked on Ron's face when Harry swore. All these little details make this story so entertaining. Oh and it's funny that Harry and Snape stayed in the dark for their conversation.
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