I really like this side of Dudley and the growing detente between the two cousins.
I know what happens next chapter.
And it's killing me!
I know what happens next chapter.
And it's killing me!
Awesome chapter! I love how Harry is feeling. I hope Harry will look up to Snape as a father figure sometime soon, or whatever.
I like your portral of Duddley, showing that even he can grow up. It gives him a lot more demention than just a bully, and considering all that's happened to him, it makes sense.
I like how you slowly bring Harry down to the cellar...nothing in your story ever seems random, everything so well thought out and plotted.
I also like that Snape and Harry made up... sort of, in their own way. But you'd didn't go overboard making it seem as though nothing had ever happened... because in real life it takes people a while to get over things.
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