T_T I hate Lucius. This chapter is so horrible (not writing wise etc) but the content... what happened. It's so... T_T but it must be. It's sort of a turning point in your fic (as I think of it), where everything that happens afterwards, is so much stronger because of this. (It's hard to explain).
I do think you managed to have a incredibly horrible torture session (Harry T_T) without making it so over the top that it's unbelievable. Oh and since you had the Snape/pensive incident, you know that Snape is suffering through this too. This chapter must have been hard to write. (It's hard to read) ack I don't know what else to say. Please update soon, for the sanity of those reading the fic here for the first time. I think I'm gonna need to wonder over to the other site and read till I get to some happy bits. T_T
oh, dag, I feel like *crying*
well done
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