Thank you sooooo much for not making the wait too long! These last chapters have been really good and very intense! I hope that Snape will finally talk to Harry again since it wasn't like Harry knew he was leaving the house in the first place.
Please please please please update soon!!
This was definitely the changing point in the story - I agree with on that. For me, this chapter was like reading something straight out of the books, the first time around; on the edge of my seat, on the verge of tears because it's all so atrocious and heartbreaking. And SOOO well written. You really are the best sevitus author out there - there is no one that can even compare to your level of writing.
Keira
I had been wondering where you'd choose to leave off -- since you're posting several chapters at once. Very intense of course. I like the way you have Snape holding Harry at the last in a somewhat similar hold as in their first Grimmauld Place lessons in occlumency.
Lucius is particularly vicious in your story.
You did such excellent work of building in tiny hints and clues throughout these chapters.
Hope you post more soon, so that new readers can find out what happens.
T_T I hate Lucius. This chapter is so horrible (not writing wise etc) but the content... what happened. It's so... T_T but it must be. It's sort of a turning point in your fic (as I think of it), where everything that happens afterwards, is so much stronger because of this. (It's hard to explain).
I do think you managed to have a incredibly horrible torture session (Harry T_T) without making it so over the top that it's unbelievable. Oh and since you had the Snape/pensive incident, you know that Snape is suffering through this too. This chapter must have been hard to write. (It's hard to read) ack I don't know what else to say. Please update soon, for the sanity of those reading the fic here for the first time. I think I'm gonna need to wonder over to the other site and read till I get to some happy bits. T_T
"What must be"... I'm glad you took us all through this, it is a small comfrot knowing that he will survive in the end. It gives Harry the strength to endure (aaaahhh I dunno If I can read the next chapter T_T). It's soooo sand because Harry knows what's going to happen and he knows he's going to have to put up with it... And there's nothing he can do. It must be aweful. I want to cry.
I remember the first time I got to this chapter, I was so excited "finding sals"... I suppose he did find sals, but then T_T stupid Malfoy. This time reading it, I still wished that Harry could back out quickly (kind of like you hope the Titanic won't hit the ice burg) even when I know better... I like how you have Harry worry about everyone else, even under the circumstances.
I like your portral of Duddley, showing that even he can grow up. It gives him a lot more demention than just a bully, and considering all that's happened to him, it makes sense.
I like how you slowly bring Harry down to the cellar...nothing in your story ever seems random, everything so well thought out and plotted.
I also like that Snape and Harry made up... sort of, in their own way. But you'd didn't go overboard making it seem as though nothing had ever happened... because in real life it takes people a while to get over things.
oh, dag, I feel like *crying*
well done
Poor Snape, why can't Harry just leave him be? T_T
btw... when you mentioned that sals was missing, it made me... um, aprehensive. Even so, I look forward to an update.
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