I can understand why Harry would really want to know. I mean it would be hard trusting Snape, spending so much time with the man... all the while worrying about what he'd done. But I feel for Snape at the same time... always having to prove yourself...
Great chapter btw, it's tense and interesting and I can't wait to read the next one...
I really like Remus' take on Harry's dreams. His explanations do make a lot of sense. Oh you do a good job of passing the time, like a while has passed, but you don't bore us with the day to day dribble... (a thing I struggle with T_T)
I love these chapters as Harry pushes Snape to reveal things and Snape retaliates with more than Harry bargained for. This really works well to set the stage for later events.
I'm enjoying reading this more slowly.
Wow. That was a bit of an intense chapter. Do you have all these chapters prewritten or something? Is that why you are able to update so often? This story is just awesome!
It's cute that Harry keeps mentioning the whiskey, it reminds me he is still just sixteen.
I forgot to mention earlier, but sals coloring is really cool. Sals is a snake in gryffindor colors... hhmmm... you know your story could be something students analyze and write essays about in english class (one of the good ones). So much foreshadowing, symbolism, and themes... Probably why your fic is the best fanfic... It's a classic!
Sals is the cutest pet ever. When I read this the first time through I was so worried that Sals would be evil... I dunno why. I told my friend (who had read your story first) that if Sals was evil I would stop reading. Speaking of Sals... where'd he/she go in ASLNO? (did you say, because I'm sorry if I forgot)
Oh and I really like how Snape made Harry apologize. It's a good contrast to how Remus is treating him.
You're occlumency/clearing mind techniques are really cool. I wish I could do it (lol).
I really like how you develop Snape. It's not as though you're changing him to be nicer or something... but instead you're just giving him more layers. It's like meeting another side of Snape that was always there (at least potentially).
This is turning out really great so far!
Remus has always been funny. Too nice... like harry will break if he does magic in front of him.
It's cute how Harry stays up to wait for Snape. And I love Snape's joke about Dumbledore. It's even funnier because Harry thought Snape was serious.
THis story is great and I love how you keep updating frequently! :)
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