Yippee! It's great to see this story over here on P&S. What a great location for all of us Harry-Snape father-son fanatics to find your wonderful story.
For those new to the story, just remember that it starts somewhat slowly, but it picks up fast. And then it becomes a wonderful ride!
Wow, the best story ever (in my opinion) comes to potions and snitchs... I wonder how long it will take for your story to get featured? I feel compelled to let you know that I started writing my own story when AYLNO ended and I had to suffer till ASLNO came out. (aka you inspired me)
Oh a comment about your chapter. I like how your story starts out slow (not boring) and introduces us to the characters/situations in a normal way. (Not the fanfic way where suddenly the HP world is turned upside down).
In my opinion however, I think that you should combine some of your earlier chapters into longer ones (not that it really matters now... since they're written anyway). But these first few chapters seem more like seperate scenes than seperate chapters.
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