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Reviews For Forlorn Dream
Title: The-Boy-Who-Could-Not-Die 05 Aug 2010 5:14 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Forlorn Dream....as in this is a dream!

    Confusing but brilliant beginning.
Title: The Snake and the Phoenix 02 Aug 2010 1:05 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh. Awesome.

    I think my brain's gonna explode at the awesomeness of it all, actually. It's, like, yeah... no. I can't explain coherently. I'd have to read them both again to sort it properly.

    ANYHOW, excellently written, again. It was unique, yet with all the charm that make me fall in love with Forlorn Hope. Love this.
Title: And Which Am I? 02 Aug 2010 12:40 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn, indeed. I'm interested to see what this 'birthright' is, finally. You alluded to it in Forlorn Hope and I was disappointed we never saw what it was.

    Another awesome chappie. Kinda nervous about what Malfoy's so chipper about, though...
Title: Distorted Beyond Hope 02 Aug 2010 12:14 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this line: "Thank Merlin for small favors endowed upon him by senile Dark Lords… and for his father’s famed self-control." Blood brilliant!

    Poor Horris, though - definitely wasn't expecting that. His other life didn't prepare him to survive in this Twilight Zone!
Title: My Image in the Mirror 01 Aug 2010 11:51 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh. Um... Horris? You're Harry right now. Haven't you figured that out, yet? *bites lip nervously*

    I feel so sorry for all the Asps, though. Poor guys. They had hell before, but at least they didn't have to be subservient to *that*.
Title: The Room in Mind 01 Aug 2010 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, right. R.O.R. I knew that. *headdesk* Didn't I say I'm not known for my observance skills? LOL

    Poor Horris. Gosh, I hope he gets back somehow, or things get sorted out, anyway (since he is, you stated, dead).
Title: Down the Rabbit Hole 01 Aug 2010 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Weird. Seriously, after reaching Forlorn Hope, I feel like I've stepped into the Twilight Zone. Everything's just so... strange!

    Great chapter - can't wait to see what the R.O.R. is.
Title: Sense and Nonsense 01 Aug 2010 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    That lab sure is a mess, isn't it? I'm getting the distinct impression that things are QUITE different from Horris' reality.

    I'm doing my damnedest to catch everything, but I'm sure a few things have slipped my notice... Also, I am not known for being incredibly observant. >.-
Title: The-Boy-Who-Could-Not-Die 01 Aug 2010 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    "meant to be totally and utterly confusing"? Greeeat. Like I don't confuse myself enough. I'll be keeping my eyes peeled - and the title is duly noted.

    Glad to see that there's more to the Saga, even if it isn't supposed to be an actual sequel, but a "fanfic of a fanfic".

    Awesome start - but then, it only took me a few chapters of Forlorn Hope to know that I love your writing style. ^^
Title: The Snake and the Phoenix 08 Nov 2009 11:00 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no!! This one's even more depressing!! The third one better fix it!!

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