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Title: Chapter 36 - Boundaries 01 Feb 2020 2:08 pm
Reviewer: Blueber (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Harry! Oh Snape! I feel for them both! You write their angst and character development beautifully. I thought that they had reached a good place, but I know realize that Harry needs to know that Snape does care and will be there for him even if he messes up, and that Snape needs to move beyond his discomfort and step up to his new role by choice. Thank you so much for continuing to write this great story!

    Author's Response: Very good point! Yep, sometimes you have to go through trying circumstances to test out whether you can ultimately let your guard down and trust. Both Snape and Harry have their own forms of emotional baggage and trust issues. Poor guys. Here's hoping they'll shape up! Thank you for the review. :)
Title: Chapter 36 - Boundaries 01 Feb 2020 9:00 am
Reviewer: Draco-senpai (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn, I read the title of this chapter and thought, “Boundaries doesn’t sound good.” Boy was I right. Besides the OBVIOUS events at the end of the chapter (don’t give up, Harry, my love!), I really liked some of the topics brought up in Snape’s and Kneader’s conversation (and what thoughts they brought up for Harry). I noticed when Kneader mentioned he thought Harry was attached to Snape, and Harry didn’t even protest. At first, I expected Harry to think, “Why would he say that?” or deny it in some way, but Harry just took it—later on actually admitting he looked up to Snape. Needless to say, I was quite proud of my boys in that moment. And the comfort for Harry’s panic attack... right in my softened potions and snitches heart. Of course, that chain of events escalated quickly... but I’m content to patiently wait for your next installment before I formulate my thoughts on it. Also, I’m glad you feel better. I hope you continue to recover. Thank you for a wonderful update! ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Yes, our boys have come a long way, haven't they? And yet still so far to go... :)

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