THAT'S IT???!?!?!?!?!!? No more??? Noooooo!!!!!!!! You can't leave us hanging like this! I just found this story a few days ago and have been devouring it, only to have you cut me off cold turkey.....Not nice!
This story is AWESOME!!! You do an incredible job of making it realistic; unlike many stories where Snape and Harry suddenly have an epiphany and become best buds in a week, you are actually stretching it out like it would be in life. Yet, it is not so much so that it is boring. That there is a very fine line to trod upon.
Please keep it coming and update update UPDATE! Good luck with future chapters, I can't wait. :D
ForEll
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 28 Aug 2009 1:52 am
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| Reviewer: solina (Signed)
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Oh I so hope that you'll continue this... If you're finding it hard after so much time, have some hot chocolate&good music (:
all the best!
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 26 Mar 2009 12:40 am
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| Reviewer: sen (Anonymous)
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Ohh, a cliffhanger... and I truly hope this hasn't been abandoned, I really like to read Snape&Harry mentoring stories and this is seriously the best that I've read, in terms of the plot and the spot-on characterisation of all the characters. You've also got a writing style that sort of reminds me of how Rowling writes - it's like writing something genuinely funny comes effortlessly to you. I rarely laugh aloud when reading, but I've always found myself doing just that while reading Harry Potters, and I found myself laughing aloud a lot while reading you story.
it's excellent and very entertaining! I really really really hope you haven't stopped writing, for if writing this has even half the pleasure that many find from reading this, you really shouldn't stop here!! ;)
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 23 Mar 2009 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: astutia (Signed)
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This has got to be one of the very best fics I have read in a very long time. Why did you stop? Please continue? You've come so far, and so much of the plot is set up already...
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 08 Mar 2009 3:58 am
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| Reviewer: Wyrsa (Signed)
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Very nice story! Hope the author will eventually come back.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 21 Feb 2009 8:09 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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Oh, this is just so GOOD! I am really glad I found your story!
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 21 Nov 2008 9:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Alohamora (Anonymous)
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Wow. *speechless* This is fantastic! I am blown away, you have got Snape and Harry's personalities spot on.
I loved reading this story. Snape's sarcastic comments were so funny and every time Harry said,"Huh?" I giggled.
I especially liked the part when Snape helps Harry in his horrible dream about the basement. It was good that you made him speak softly to Harry but also show that he started to panic. ("Potter. You are dreaming. Wake up.")
The funniest part in this story for me was when Snape called Harry "Harry" and fro him to reply, "I'm not that stupid. Snape doesn't call me "Harry." And Snape's reaction was brilliant (loved how he chuckled. I mean, seriously, I have longed for him to show some humour!)
Please update soon otherwise Snape and Harry will probably track you down, saying, "Hello? We've benn standing here for ages, give us something to do!" LOL! Just kidding, can't rush great art you know! But I would like to see some more... *hints hopefully*
P:S: This is my first review! :-)
Please tell me that you have not abandoned this story. I may wither away from despair if you have. This story is brilliant. You have an amazing skill with writing. Please update soon.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 18 Aug 2008 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous)
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Yay! I'm so glad to hear it's not abandoned. We can wait. ;)
That's a very big move! :o Hope things are turning out well.
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 27 Jun 2008 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous)
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I see that you last updated in January, and it is now June, but I'm hoping (fingers crossed) that you might come back and finish? I am, of course, hooked on the plot, but I am especially enjoying the very realistic, SLOW, development of the relationship between Harry and Snape.
Even if you don't get a chance to finish, though, I want to thank you for posting as much as you have. Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us.
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