Nooo, nooo, why have you never continued this? Noooo, such a cliff-hanger. Noooo.
Have I mentioned noooooo before? xD
Well. This was great so far and if you ever think about resuming, I'll be first to comment. :D
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 04 Dec 2009 11:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Maya (Anonymous)
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Kirby, your story is ridiculously good.
i love the budding mentorship between Harry and Snape, the way they both resist it so much but cannot help the inevitable.
your portrayal of both of their characters is spotless. all too often we see a Snape that changes his disposition over night or a Harry that is suddenly meek or weaker then he is portrayed in the books. but you managed to avoid all of that. you maintain an extraordinary balance between humor and angst, between delving into the characters psyche and just some good old-fashioned action.
sooo, what i'm actually trying to say is that this is my absolute favorite Harry potter fanfiction. i really hope you won't keep us hanging much longer and continue to write.
please... pretty please? ... with cream cheese on top?
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 17 Nov 2009 6:31 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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...Aargh! Don't leave it there!!
I really like this story, I'm so glad you're updating eventually! (I don't have net access at home so as much as I'd love to review each marvellous chapter, I really can't.)
You get chocolate sauce to compensate :p
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 09 Oct 2009 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: solina (Signed)
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This story is very good and realistic... but I'm sort of losing hope that you'll ever update, even if you keep promising that you will. I've been waiting forever, and I'd rather that you told us readers if you're not updating than leaving us hanging... but I do understand that real life always has to come first, and if writing isn't enjoyable anymore, no one's making you continue :)
But I guess I won't be checking this story again like I've been doing for a very long time. Good luck with everything!
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 03 Oct 2009 11:16 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Great story! I hope you will be posting more chapters soon!
THAT'S IT???!?!?!?!?!!? No more??? Noooooo!!!!!!!! You can't leave us hanging like this! I just found this story a few days ago and have been devouring it, only to have you cut me off cold turkey.....Not nice!
This story is AWESOME!!! You do an incredible job of making it realistic; unlike many stories where Snape and Harry suddenly have an epiphany and become best buds in a week, you are actually stretching it out like it would be in life. Yet, it is not so much so that it is boring. That there is a very fine line to trod upon.
Please keep it coming and update update UPDATE! Good luck with future chapters, I can't wait. :D
ForEll
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 28 Aug 2009 1:52 am
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| Reviewer: solina (Signed)
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Oh I so hope that you'll continue this... If you're finding it hard after so much time, have some hot chocolate&good music (:
all the best!
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 26 Mar 2009 12:40 am
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| Reviewer: sen (Anonymous)
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Ohh, a cliffhanger... and I truly hope this hasn't been abandoned, I really like to read Snape&Harry mentoring stories and this is seriously the best that I've read, in terms of the plot and the spot-on characterisation of all the characters. You've also got a writing style that sort of reminds me of how Rowling writes - it's like writing something genuinely funny comes effortlessly to you. I rarely laugh aloud when reading, but I've always found myself doing just that while reading Harry Potters, and I found myself laughing aloud a lot while reading you story.
it's excellent and very entertaining! I really really really hope you haven't stopped writing, for if writing this has even half the pleasure that many find from reading this, you really shouldn't stop here!! ;)
| Title: Chapter 18 - A Lesson in Being Slytherin
| 25 Mar 2009 3:41 am
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| Reviewer: sen (Anonymous)
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I love this story to bits!! Can't stop for a longer review though, I must read on, but excellent characterisation, the story is full of beautiful nuances! THANK YOU!
| Title: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor
| 23 Mar 2009 5:53 am
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| Reviewer: astutia (Signed)
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This has got to be one of the very best fics I have read in a very long time. Why did you stop? Please continue? You've come so far, and so much of the plot is set up already...
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