Title: Chapter 2 - An Inconvenient Conscience
| 04 May 2007 7:02 pm
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Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed)
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I liked this chapter a lot. You have set things up beautifully for Snape to learn just exactly how Harry is treated at home--which is one of the main things I've always wanted Snape in canon to figure out. Harry's efforts to clean up Snape were believable--not too bumbling, but he's never shown any abilities with healing before either.
The actual writing of this story flows well, and I noticed no errors. That is a wonderful gift to this terribly picky reader. I should also note since you are a new writer that I am a fairly hard grader--a story has to be really exceptional to get more than an eight from me and I'm more than willing to give less! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for the nice review. I hope you like the rest of the story... And I will have to make it my personal mission in life to get more than an eight from you. :) This is going to be fun...