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Title: Escaped Convicts 25 Jan 2022 6:39 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    So glad that Sirius is being proactive in advertising his innocence!
Title: Escaped Convicts 07 Oct 2007 5:00 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I was not expecting to see Sirius in this story! And he's actually confronted Alec in Hogwarts. No wonder Severus is being so protective. I would be, too.

    And I was so surprised at seeing Sirius that I almost forgot about Lisa and Alexander. I'm glad we got to meet Lisa, and I have a feeling we'll see more of her later.

    It's nice that Alec gets to ride the train like the other kids, too. Maybe he'll meet some friends.

    Author's Response: Sirius will certainly reappear again later... And the same goes for Lisa!
Title: Escaped Convicts 13 Jul 2007 9:20 pm
Reviewer: Arcana_Mortalitas (Signed) [Report This]
    I think it's cute how Severus is so protective of 'Alec'. Alec is a nice name. Love the story.

    Author's Response: I got the name Alec from Web of Lies on ff.net and fell in love with it! Glad to know your enjoying my story so far!
Title: Escaped Convicts 16 Jun 2007 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful intense scene there with Sirius! You did a brilliant job writing him hon! Snape's protective instincts have certainly kicked into high gear too!
    Wonderful!
    Tracy

    Author's Response:

    Sirius will appear again in chapter 9....

Title: Escaped Convicts 16 May 2007 5:24 am
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an interesting story. I just looked on ff.net and found there is more to the story. I'm going to read it there.

    Author's Response: Well thanks for the review and I hope you like the story!
Title: Escaped Convicts 15 May 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how Sirius will feel when (if) he finds out that Alec is Harry. I wonder though, since Harry is starting out a year earlier... does Percy still have his "rat"? Because then Pettigrew is there... and yeah interesting prospects. I look forward to an update.

    Author's Response: He will find out... eventually. The rat will show up eventually as well. Thanks for another review!
Title: Escaped Convicts 15 May 2007 6:58 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks again for the review!
Title: Escaped Convicts 15 May 2007 3:10 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely written if a little skimpy on dialogue. You did cover a lot of ground in this piece so far. Harry doesn't have much of a personality, but Severus is coming along. A ten year old will be at a disadvantage with 11 year olds. Even if he is smart, developmentally, he still has a year less experience in his outlook and reactions. I was a little confused because you had a blond haired Lucius and a blond haired Alexander who had a daughter. You haven't told us who the second man is. I bet you're holding that until the next chapter.

    Author's Response: The blond haired Alexander is the man who helped with the kidnapping earlier in my story. Alex had told Harry that he had a daughter who was 'odd' like him and that was basically a set up for my new character. I hope that clarified the difference between the two blonds. Thanks for the review!

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