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Reviews For Never Normal
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I should have the next chapter up tomorrow!
I had an idea... for the begining of your chapter, you could add in some more emotion (for Harry). Like he panics or something and that's why the door unlocks. Author's Response: In my opinion, the Dursley's seem to enjoy causing him pain whether it be mental or physical just because they are horrible people. If I find time to re-write this, I will make a note to add more emotion for Harry. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I certainly agree! Vernon would be the type to do that. Thanks so much for the review!
Author's Response: It's hard for Snape to be gentle because of who he is and I try to keep him in character as much as possible. I'm glad you like it and thanks so much for the review! |
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