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Title: John 14:2 25 Sep 2009 11:06 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story but in the UK we don't have air conditioning in our houses seeing as our summer lasts about 5 seconds and it would be a waste of money, we prefer expensive central heating.
Title: John 14:2 04 Jul 2007 11:14 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter.

    Author's Response: thanks
Title: John 14:2 02 Jul 2007 11:52 pm
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting premise, but this was way too easy. I felt like the established characters of both Severus and Harry were ignored in favor of your plans.

    Author's Response:

    I'm sorry you feel that way. I know people interpret the characters differently and I really did try to keep them as true to the character personalities as possible... but it is an AU and as they change and start to open up to each other they will develop more differently than in the books. I do see why you would feel that way... at least in Harry's case. I had a hard time trying to figure out when and how much Harry would trust Snape and stuff... and this is how it came out.

    Thanks for your review!

Title: John 14:2 24 May 2007 7:53 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a relief not to have all the errors in this chapter. It seemed that you are going to make Harry a fairly open type of person in this story. I'm intrigued by the work out room and the fact that Harry is now an heir of Slytherin. That is always fun.

    Author's Response:

    Don't be too intrigued by the work out room. Whenever I write a story that involves a new house, I draw it out first so that I don't forget where everything is and then write something totally different one chapter than in another chapter. I just had an extra space in the house and needed to fill it.... plus, Snapes kinda a pale guy and I figure he doesn't really work out in the sun too much so he probably gets his exercise inside.

    hehe.... the heir of Slytherin. Yeah i thought that would be great fun.

Title: John 14:2 09 May 2007 3:13 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I still love this line: “Headmaster… Albus, I will be going to Privet Drive and I will retrieve what is rightfully mine.” I loved how Snape found Harry, without the Dursleys. Nice pace.

    Muah ha haha! Love it! Now I want to see how Snpae and Harry will be getting along. No doubt, it will be bumpy. I love how Harry asked about Snape's wife. I wonder if he's curious enough to snoop.

    Author's Response: He's probably not going to be too curious for the next couple of chapters. The beginning is time for Snape to be curious about Harry. Thanks for following along and reviewing and stuff!
Title: John 14:2 09 May 2007 12:26 am
Reviewer: MorwenIsilwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it! Love the chapter titles!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I had the idea at work when some customer left a Bible in one of the aisles and I was looking through it during a break.

Title: John 14:2 07 May 2007 7:34 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this story. Not sure why it has such a low score, trying to boost it.

    Author's Response: thanks for the support!
Title: John 14:2 05 May 2007 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I feel sorry for both of them. Snape seems to genuinely miss his wife. Harry is just glad to be away from the Dursley's. Looking forward to more shattered images and truths being unveiled.

    Author's Response: I can't wait for the truth either! I've had the plan for how and when it will be revealed for... oh well I've had the plan in my head for a couple of months now and I can't wait until I get to it.
Title: John 14:2 05 May 2007 10:38 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter! I'm happy to see that Snape is trying!

    Author's Response:

    thanks!

Title: John 14:2 05 May 2007 7:01 am
Reviewer: Tsukinoko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the bible verses at the beginning of the chapters. I bet Harry's going to be mad that Severus didn't tell him the truth right away!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I like the Bible verses too. yay!


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