Title: An Accident
| 08 Apr 2009 1:26 am
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Reviewer: mimi (Anonymous)
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Oh, I really liked this story! Very nicely done!
Aw! Snape actually cares. I liked that one; good job on your first fic!
-P.G.
Ah, wondeful, extremely sweet and fits the challenge perfectly, only thing is, I want more! Please, please write a sequel to this, or even extend it into a larger fic, it has so much potential!
Just read it again. Haha loved it. What a mistake to make.
Title: An Accident
| 03 May 2008 5:01 am
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Reviewer: frosted midnight (Anonymous)
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I loved this! It made me smile. Poor Snape, He has embarrassed himself...the best way to see Snape!
Haha. Wow that was great. I especially love when Snape banishes the sharp objects from the room and Harry is just soo totally confused as to whats going on. Excellent! And congrats on finding the courage to write your first piece!
LOL, Great response to the challenge! It was very satisfying! Have you ever thought of turning it into a chaptered story? I think it would be really cool! You seemed to have great grammer and Snape & Harry were perfect! Scorpia
That was a great little fic, I loved how Sev was being so kind to him even if he was misled.
Title: An Accident
| 20 Feb 2008 4:39 am
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Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Hey! That was great. I really liked Snape's babbling and stumbling all over the place. And that he had a bit of compassion under the oh so mean exterior. Well done!
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