Great story cant wait to read more.
| Title: Making Amends
| 13 Jul 2007 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide Cheque (Anonymous)
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WoW! That is the best way to describe this fantastic chapter...WoW!
I loved Snape's reaction to everything...you did a great Vernon Dursley as well. Great Chapter!!
| Title: Forcing Confidences
| 13 Jul 2007 12:40 am
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide Cheque (Anonymous)
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Loved that story!! Great chapter. Great writing. Wonderful interaction and some of the very BEST Harry and Snape characterizations I have read in fanfiction. Great story.
| Title: Making Amends
| 10 Jul 2007 1:16 pm
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| Reviewer: precissely (Anonymous)
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THANK YOU! I've read your story in one night, it's wonderful! My favourite scene is when Snape in his office tries to find out what's the matter.
But I've a question: how could Potter cast a glamour during the holidays? Magic is not permitted in summer?
| Title: Making Amends
| 09 Jul 2007 1:53 am
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| Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous)
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Oh, this is good! I had gotten a bit tired of Harry-beaten-by-Dursleys stories, because they tend to all seem the same after a while, but this is so well written that it didn't matter.
| Title: Making Amends
| 08 Jul 2007 6:12 pm
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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Wonderful story, I do look forward to more excellent chapters to come
I adore this story! It's so brilliantly written and spectacularly in-character. Plus quirky, I don't think I've smiled at the computer screen so much in my life - people who walk in think I'm just a little bit odd. And I adore the 'good cop, bad cop' aspect of Dumbledore and Snape's relationship, it's so appropriate. I look forward to the continuation!
That was a very fun chapter. One of my new all time favorite pastimes will be "intimidate Dursley". :)
Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next chapter.
Ooooh, I like the bit where he picks up the toy soldier.
I'm loving your story. Good luck with the next chapter!
Very interesting chapter. My favorite part was definately the opening line, "The lawn of 4 Privet Drive is at once a marvel of geometric precision and an offense against nature, in Snape's opinion."
I can just *see* Snape thinking that, sneer in place. Excellent job with the characterization.
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