| Title: Chapter 1
| 03 Jul 2007 5:10 am
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| Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous)
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| Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Jul 2007 8:58 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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NOOOOOOOO!!!!! Don't end it there!!!!!! What a bad cliffy!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I've got the majority of the next chapter written, but I need my beta to work her magic. It'll be up soon!
Excellent start! I really really want to know what's going to happen next so pretty please add another chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm working on the begining of the next chaper, then my beta will go over it, but don't worry! Its nearly done!
Yikes! Nasty cliffhanger there. It looks like it's going to be an interesting story. I'm looking forward to updates.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
I'm interested to see where you take this story, but I will suggest you get a beta ready. You have several minor word swaps due to Spell Check ("minuet" instead of "minute," "defiantly" instead of "definitely") that would be caught be an attentive Beta. Over all, the story seems to be good; you have solid grammatical work and you seem to have a plot line set up in your head. It's a story with a lot of potential, and I would love to read more!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know. My next chaper will be bated, as I got one :) Thanks for the reveiw!
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