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Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 10:51 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww...Draco's a little spoiled, but still a good kid at heart.
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 7:48 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a perfect Draco! Lucius was great, too. I love how you portray that family. Seems just right to me. Poor Harry, surgery then Draco tries to make him feel inadequate. I'm glad he keeps his belief that he's doing just fine.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I figure Draco and Harry will be good for each other.  They both need a good friend, and an adult who cares about them.
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 6:47 am
Reviewer: Istalindir (Anonymous) [Report This]
    =D Yes, we are your Encouragement Squad. >=o *Shakes whip* Work faster!!

    =D And have a nice day~

    XP Anyway, now that I've encouraged you. Your story is wonderful. And you write fast! You're everything I love in an author. =3 Thanks for the story. XD And the fast updates.
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 6:09 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    I always feel the desire to start off my reviews with a deep felt "Awww!" So, I guess you're getting another one of those ;) My heart went out to Harry when he cried over everything. It's good of him to cleanse his pallet like that. I hope he does come to realize that Sev will never send him back to the Dursleys. And Draco... Man, I had friends like him growing up. They're still dear friends of mine, but I remember being so digustingly jealous that one friend had each of the 101 Dalmations stuff dogs, and she also had ALL the American Girl dolls and I only had three. Yup. Lol. I'm glad he's feeling better though. It's about time! ;)

    Keira

    Author's Response: Thanks, Kiera!  It's gonna take a long while before Harry truly feels like he's wanted at his new home, and that he's not in danger of being sent away.  But then, he's severely neglected, and doesn't really get that anyone could love him, even though he loves so freely.  I'm glad the cathartic crying worked for readers.  I didn't want it to be too sappy, but it's something the boy needed, you know?  New chapter in a day or two.  --rachel
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 5:54 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Lord, he bit through to the tendon? I cringe to think about everything he's been through at the Dursleys. Will we ever find out about Harry's fear of the bathtub?

    I'm so happy Draco's arrived! lol. I didn't even think about them both visiting Hagrid...let's hope Draco isn't rude or anything, but I won't hold my breath. I love how you characterized Draco...he's still a bit of a brat, but seems to redeem himself in the end.

    I'm lovin' everything about this story :) Keep it up!

    Author's Response: Fear of bathtubs?  What fear of bathtubs?  Kidding!  I'm almost tempted to never explain it, like in BtVS, where we never find out exactly why Anya was afraid of bunnies.  But no, I will explain.  It's just gonna be a bit longer . . .  And thanks, seriously, for your thoughtful reviews.  I very much appreciate your kind words.  --rachel
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 5:43 am
Reviewer: Annette (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh! Cute! Little fluffy bunnies with big pink bows cute! :) Gonna be even *cuter* watching Draco get mauled by Fang, I bet.

    Author's Response: Drool galore!  (And are the big pink bows bigger than the little bunnies?  Just 'cuz if they were top heavy or knocked on their sides by the weight of bows, well, that'd be like the trifecta of cute!)
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 5:35 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad to see Harry's hand has been fixed up. Yay Draco is finally here! Now they can get into mischief...

    Author's Response: Lots and lots of mischief.  Sev is never gonna be the same . . .  ;-)
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 4:43 am
Reviewer: JMGodfreyIII (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay more Draco, they are sooooo cute XD

    Author's Response: And more Hagrid, and more Draco and Hagrid, and Fang!  Cute everywhere! :-)
Title: Chapter 20 14 Aug 2007 4:17 am
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is so cute. I love kidfics, and it's fun to see how fast you update. Plus you've got a lot of interesting ideas. And Harry is so cute! I can't wait for an update!

    Author's Response: Soon, updates soon, I promise.  Hmm, are there pools going to see how fast I get a new chappie out?  'cuz I want in . . . though I might have an unfair advantage in guessing.  ;-)

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