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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 23 23 Jan 2013 4:46 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    What is Severus taking points from when it's summer? I'm surprised that Severus just blurted out his intentions because I thought that he generally thinks out every possible scenario before saying anything. I'm also always surprised at how calm Harry becomes after having these episodes.
Title: Chapter 23 26 Sep 2007 8:02 am
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay!
Title: Chapter 23 27 Aug 2007 2:55 pm
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. This is great stuff. Can hardly wait for more..... Thanks
Title: Chapter 23 26 Aug 2007 7:28 am
Reviewer: Adele (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are awesome and I love you . I mean, it really is amazing how you've got all these fics going at once and yet not only do you update them frequently but you also manage to make them satisfying and well written. For both this one and the Slytherin!Harry one, in plot they're like ones I've seen before, but I would think, "That's a really good story idea, but the writing style is holding it back. How great would it have been with someone who could really *write*?" And now here you are :). So thanks!
Title: Chapter 23 26 Aug 2007 12:57 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    *Shakes Harry* I just want him to SEE what he's missing. The whole picture is RIGHT THERE and he can't see past the immediate present. Gah. Lol. You're really good at getting us all riled up. I like that there doesn't hardly ever seem to be a moment of peace, though I do think it'd be nice to see Harry smile and laugh and even perk up just a little. I can't wait for the day he does. Lol.
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 9:47 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Great use of canon, and I loved how Severus used legilimency to help Harry. Seeing the things that had hurt him in the past now being put in service to help should help some wounds to begin to heal. And now Harry has to deal with the secrets he has kept.
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 9:54 am
Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Gods, I'm crying (well my version of a cry), I've hardly ever cried for a story. It was so sweet though. I like it better than A Year Like None Other if you've read it and how Harry reacts to the torture. I like your version better of his struggles. The diary is neat too and I can really see how you plan to show his progress.

    I hope you don't kill off Snape 'cuz (would that be a banned word?)I saw mentions of DH. I don't think I would be able to handle anymore tear jerking emotions.
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 7:00 am
Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No, you make OUR day. :D
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 6:46 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! That was a good chapter, I liked Harry's reaction. Are you tying in some Deathly Hallows stuff in here or was this stuff you had already imagined for your story? Poor Harry, he needs a guardian soon!
Title: Chapter 23 25 Aug 2007 6:10 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's childhood really, really sucked. :-(

    Ah, the Prophecy again. Interesting that Snape still doesn't know the whole thing.

    Author's Response:

    Re: the prophecy, I figured that whatever Snape doesn't know, Voldie can't yank out of his head.  Snape's a really good Occlumens, but he's not perfect. . . .  Thanks for your reviews!


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