How many times can you say 'thanks for a really brilliant chapter' before it gets old I wonder?
Severus's conversation with Albus was great, though I have to admit, I never really enjoy Albus as the evil manipulator. He was, however, at least a little conniving which I think that your Albus portrays well without turning into an alternative for Tom Riddle. Severus's emotions through that conversation were so great thought, just really controlled and tense, I loved it!
And the Defense book! How sad, another thing from Sirius that has been destroyed. Severus should give his copy to Harry I say! And that strange Occlumency scene, very intriguing. I can't wait to see what is behind that part of the wall and how Severus will choose to deal with it.
I hope that you have a particularly swell weekend and good luck with the writing of your many stories!
nice cliffie although it was evil. Glad to see Dumbledore has decided to be supportive in his own way. Looking forward to finding out what the heck is going on with Harry. Keep up the great work, LES.
Ah, Severus has just figured out he still has a HUGE job ahead of him. I liked the imagery you used to describe the occlumency session.
You amaze me really. You are truly a master manipulator of the mind. I loved every word. Looking forward to more. Thanks.
Yay!! Very interesting, I can't wait to find out what Harry is hiding behind his wall! I hope this next chapter is out by Monday, I'll need something to keep me sane during the school year!!
Oh dear. He found a maelstrom in Harry's mind, this is getting good. How will he go about helping him with this terrible find? Updates coming soon, I hope?
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