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Title: Chapter 35 27 Sep 2007 3:19 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, not many left! This is by far my favourite story of yours. I can't really write you a long review today but here it goes.

    So much about this chapter made me smile. Severus calling Harry 'his little Slytherin'! How cute. And then telling him to come 'home' early if he needed to. And then Harry saying 'Hi, I'm home' at the end. All of these things and others made me grin wildly throught this chapter. It was great.

    I'm glad Harry got the chance to have a normal sort of conversation with Remus. And I'm wondering when Harry is going to have to see Dumbledore again and apologise? That shall be interesting.

    Harry seems to be moving in leaps and bounds at the moment. Well kind of, but things seem to be steadily improving for him. I like the routine that him and Severus seem to have fallen into, it's lovely.

    Looking very much forward to the next chapter! All the best!
Title: Chapter 35 27 Sep 2007 1:50 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a really good chapter. They're all good, really. Snape was acting quite protective when Harry was off to Remus's. I loved that part.

    By the way, I think I tried to write a review this morning when I was at work (it was before 7:00...the memory is vague. lol) and somehow it deleted. Anyway, I had said that I would love a sequel. In fact, I'm begging you for a sequel!! I would have been in a right state of panic at the words "the end" so I'm glad you gave fair warning in the chapter end notes :)
Title: Chapter 35 27 Sep 2007 12:37 am
Reviewer: GoodRejects (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hi, I'm home."

    djsalkdjaslkdjsa That line made me squeal. It's like their relationship is finally working the way it should and their personalities are finally clicking. .. It helps that Snape isn't as gitty as book!Snape and Harry isn't as whiny as book!Harry, but you know. =P

    This is one of the most interesting fics I've read wherein Harry gets raped or beaten/mauled in some way. I've read others where he turns into this little girly boy that freaks out at every single touch and word and look, and I'm glad you're having him actually recover from his traumatic past.

    Also: If there's no sequel, I'll cry. For serious.
Title: Chapter 35 27 Sep 2007 12:09 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry sighed. "Fine. Can I have my letters from Hermione and Ron?"

    "When you have finished your work."

    "Don't you think I'd be more motivated to do well on it and not rush through, if I had them first, and was . . . less stressed out?"

    Snape's eyes narrowed, and he crossed his arms over his chest, leaning back in the chair. "I shall allow you one letter from each, my little Slytherin. And then you will finish your essays."

    "I hope that was meant to be a compliment," Harry said.

    The one eyebrow went up. "Indeed."

    Love this bit, actually I loved the entire thing, the banter between Harry and Severus is totally awesome. Glad to see that Harry and Remus have started to get back to where they were before disaster struck. I think a sequel is an awesome idea, maybe based on their lives together when Harry is able to start classes again, or maybe their first summer together. Just a few ideas, keep up the awesome work, looking forward to the update. LES
Title: Chapter 35 26 Sep 2007 7:08 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    I, along with everyone else, I'm sure, really really want a sequel!! There's still so much of the story that we don't know and need to know!

    But, great chapter, as always!! I was smiling soo much when Severus called his chambers "home." It was perfect!

    But, we still need to know what's going on with Ron and Hermione. Hopefully Harry isn't damaged to the the extent that he can't even tolerate a visit from his closest friends.

    I really liked Harry's meeting with Remus especially with the chocolate making him feel better. I wonder if it's really the chocolate or if it's Remus himself? (Totaly irrelevent, I know!)

    Well, write write write!!
Title: Chapter 35 26 Sep 2007 5:41 pm
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    ... What's going to happen? *begs for more*
Title: Chapter 35 26 Sep 2007 5:13 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I do hope you write a sequel. Harry still has a lot of hurdles and challenges ahead. He's got to deal with Ron and Hermione, both over what happened in the summer and also his changed relationship with Snape. Somehow he has to learn to be around the children of Death Eaters, and in particular Draco -- although I do wonder what Draco would think of his father's actions. And then eventually Harry has to get to the point where he can face the Death Eaters and Voldemort again -- not just without throwing up, but to really stand up to them. The last part of that seems like a long way off in terms of Harry's healing, but still strongly related to the events of the summer. So a sequel sounds like a good idea to me. Besides, this is my favorite of your stories!
Title: Chapter 35 26 Sep 2007 5:02 pm
Reviewer: FoxxNyara (Signed) [Report This]
    You must write a sequel. You must continue to write until your eyes BLEED from staring at the screen. lol I've enjoyed your writing immensely, and I'm looking forward to how you end this, but I also think you've got a lot of options for sequels, and I'm willing to read anything you've written at least once. I think I'm gone back and reread this one at least three times, as well as your other stories. If I make you cheesecake and bonbons every day, will you live with me so I can read your stories faster? :) I'll even throw in homemade bread, but that's my best offer!
Title: Chapter 35 26 Sep 2007 4:48 pm
Reviewer: trifectamom (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another great chapter as usual. This is my favorite WIP and I get so excited when I see it's been updated. I would love, love, love to read a sequel.
Title: Chapter 35 26 Sep 2007 4:01 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww! He's home! *Smiling* This chapter was so fulfilling for everything it included -- and quite a lot -- without being overly rushed or thrown in awkwardly. I loved Severus's explamation at being called Sev, but how he told Harry to come home early if he needed it :D And that Harry finally felt relaxed around Remus and that he got those letters -- Poor Ron and Hermione. They'll be in for the shock of their lives if and when they find out what happened.

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