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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
So much about this chapter made me smile. Severus calling Harry 'his little Slytherin'! How cute. And then telling him to come 'home' early if he needed to. And then Harry saying 'Hi, I'm home' at the end. All of these things and others made me grin wildly throught this chapter. It was great. I'm glad Harry got the chance to have a normal sort of conversation with Remus. And I'm wondering when Harry is going to have to see Dumbledore again and apologise? That shall be interesting. Harry seems to be moving in leaps and bounds at the moment. Well kind of, but things seem to be steadily improving for him. I like the routine that him and Severus seem to have fallen into, it's lovely. Looking very much forward to the next chapter! All the best!
By the way, I think I tried to write a review this morning when I was at work (it was before 7:00...the memory is vague. lol) and somehow it deleted. Anyway, I had said that I would love a sequel. In fact, I'm begging you for a sequel!! I would have been in a right state of panic at the words "the end" so I'm glad you gave fair warning in the chapter end notes :)
djsalkdjaslkdjsa That line made me squeal. It's like their relationship is finally working the way it should and their personalities are finally clicking. .. It helps that Snape isn't as gitty as book!Snape and Harry isn't as whiny as book!Harry, but you know. =P This is one of the most interesting fics I've read wherein Harry gets raped or beaten/mauled in some way. I've read others where he turns into this little girly boy that freaks out at every single touch and word and look, and I'm glad you're having him actually recover from his traumatic past. Also: If there's no sequel, I'll cry. For serious.
"When you have finished your work." "Don't you think I'd be more motivated to do well on it and not rush through, if I had them first, and was . . . less stressed out?" Snape's eyes narrowed, and he crossed his arms over his chest, leaning back in the chair. "I shall allow you one letter from each, my little Slytherin. And then you will finish your essays." "I hope that was meant to be a compliment," Harry said. The one eyebrow went up. "Indeed." Love this bit, actually I loved the entire thing, the banter between Harry and Severus is totally awesome. Glad to see that Harry and Remus have started to get back to where they were before disaster struck. I think a sequel is an awesome idea, maybe based on their lives together when Harry is able to start classes again, or maybe their first summer together. Just a few ideas, keep up the awesome work, looking forward to the update. LES
But, great chapter, as always!! I was smiling soo much when Severus called his chambers "home." It was perfect! But, we still need to know what's going on with Ron and Hermione. Hopefully Harry isn't damaged to the the extent that he can't even tolerate a visit from his closest friends. I really liked Harry's meeting with Remus especially with the chocolate making him feel better. I wonder if it's really the chocolate or if it's Remus himself? (Totaly irrelevent, I know!) Well, write write write!!
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