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Reviews For Walk the Shadows
Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 11:35 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Great end to this porton of your story. Snape and Harry are both so good for each other. I'm not too sure how I feel about Draco's ?peace offering? really. Harry can be too forgiving sometimes, but I guess he's right in admitting that Draco isn't his father. He's a total prat, but relatively harmlessly in comparison to Lucius Malfoy.

    I can't wait for the sequel. Well, I guess I can wait, but it will definitely be an impatient wait (lol). Thanks so much for sharing...

    Author's Response:

    Hi curlybean,  Thanks for the review!  You're right; Harry is too forgiving, but it's his nature, and Draco isn't his father . . . he will be a significant character in the sequel, though, so we'll get to see more of his non-Luciusness in play. I should have the first chapter to the sequel out in a week or two.

Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 7:58 am
Reviewer: owlsaway (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great story. I've been reading all along but been negligent about reviewing. I think this one is my favorite of all your stories. WELL DONE!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad I finished it, as it's definitely been the hardest of my stories to write.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Nov 2007 12:15 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I truly enjoyed reading this story and while I am sorry to see it finished I can't wait to read the sequel. In fact I am going to wait a couple of days and reread this story from start to finish in preparation for the sequel.

    Author's Response: Cool, thanks!  I actually had to reread the whole thing recently, because I was sure I'd forgotten some threads somewhere that needed to be tied off . . .
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 6:25 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!! Yaaay!! I'm so glad that Draco's not a complete @ss like his father and that Harry is trying to see beyond his hatred of Lucius and give Draco a second chance!! I just hope it doesn't turn out to be a trick - Harry is so cautious, especially after his kidnapping, that it would be devastating to have his tentative overtures to Draco come back to bite him!!
    This was a fantastic story and I've really really enjoyed it (well, not the torture so much!) and I'm very much looking forward to seeing how Harry gets along this year - I love the solution Severus has come up with for Harry, and I'm wondering how long Harry will be needing to use it for, and if he can ever get back to attending classes as usual!!
    Thank you again for sharing this great story with us!!
    Scarlett

    Author's Response:

    Hi Scarlett,  Thanks for the review!  Many of your questions (okay, all of them) will be answered in the sequel, which will prominently figure Draco, in all his, uh, glory, and the further ramifications of Snape's leaving the DEs, as well as more healing for Harry, and how he deals with his friends now.  I should have the first chapter to the sequel out in a week or two, though I'm still in search of a title . . .  :-)

Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 4:33 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent ending! It's good to see that Draco was disgusted by his fathers actions. I'm still worried about how the other children of DE's will act towards Harry. I don't think he'll be able to get away with hexing them everytime they say something horrible. Outstanding story and I am eagerly awaiting the sequel!!

    Author's Response: Hi Alexis,  Thanks for the review!  Draco (and the ramifications of his choices in response to his father's actions) will figure prominently in the sequel.  And so will the responses of the other DE children to Snape's perceived defection.  There are trying times ahead!
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 3:33 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I can't believe it's over. You've moved through some of your stories so fast... and yet they're so long, lol. I absolutely adore this one in particular. It ranks right up there with a lot of other extremely well-written Severitus/Sevitus stories.

    Draco sure came to the right realization... and it took for a while, lol. I'm surprised Harry thanked him so quickly, but I like it. Shows how quick he is to be grateful, or at least pretend like he is, whichever it turns out to be, lol.

    Though, I will undoubtably be sad that this particular era has come to an end, I cannot WAIT for the sequel :D

    Author's Response:

    Hi Caramello,  Thanks for the review!  I, too, am amazed I finished this one . . . it was definitely the hardest of my stories to tackle.  You're right; Harry did thank Draco awfully quickly . . . but then, as has been pointed out, he is generally very quick to forgive, and he doesn't hold a grudge like some Snapes I might mention.  ;-)

    I should have the first chapter to the sequel out in a week or two, so no worries.

Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 3:08 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh exciting, back to school and all. The Draco thing was a surprise to me! I like that he came to see Harry before classes started, that has to be reassuring for him. Lovely chapter, I loved Harry and Severus's interactions as usual. Can't wait for the sequel when you're ready. Thanks for a great story!

    Author's Response: Hi Polaris,  Thank you for the review!  Draco will have a significant role in the sequel, as he comes to better understand harry, and his Head of House, and there is plenty more healing in store for Harry.  I should have the sequel started in a week or two.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 2:41 am
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Haha, great ending. I liked the part with Draco, in canon and fiction, I've never imagined him truly walking in his father's footsteps. Can't wait to see the sequel!
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 1:10 am
Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    beautiful ending! loved it! all your stories are amazing, can't wait for the sequel! ^^
Title: Chapter 43 06 Nov 2007 12:51 am
Reviewer: Cora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sniff, sniff, my favorite story is over. Only the thought that there will be a sequel keeps me from breaking down. Thank you so much for all the exiting hours I had, reading your story.

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