Im really enjoying this idea. As I've been reading I've noted a few simple errors that could be fixed with a quick edits. I'm stopping to leave a comment here rather than the next because in chapter 2 you had Harry confirm Pomfrey is returning but in this have a make healer coming to the school. I'm not sure if you intend multile healers (though I can see Drake taking on a counselor like role) or if that was a mistake.
As to Ginny ..... I never liked ginny/Harry but if it works keep it. You could always have them realize that they only got together out of expectations not feelings.
Again, really enjoying this and time to read the next chapter.
Love this :) come back pleaseeee :(
Author's Response: I am actually working on a new chapter now!
| Title: The weary Warrior
| 21 Sep 2012 12:05 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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The friendship between Snape and Drake makes for quite fun reading. As for Harry, I usually prefer him with Ginny, although other pairings do work. Just don't make it Harry and Luna, please.
I say no Ginny. And to update. O:)
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