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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
Title: Chapter 1 21 Aug 2007 9:44 pm
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked how you started this fic!
    and how you ended this chapter.
    I hope the next chapter is longer though.
    I though you played Harry and Ron wonderfuly.
    I will be waiting for more!
    ttyl
    smelly cat
Title: Chapter 1 19 Aug 2007 2:41 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a bad start. I would suggest getting a beta reader though to fix errors like this-

    "Ya were good" It should be something like "Yeah, we're good".

    Author's Response: How do I get a beta reader?
Title: Chapter 1 18 Aug 2007 10:12 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    It looks like you have a good idea, here. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

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