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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
Title: Chapter 10 20 Sep 2008 3:13 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I have not forgotten about this story, but I did place it out of my mind for a while, lol. I'm so glad you updated, yay you!
Title: Chapter 10 22 May 2008 3:46 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting fic, very well written i am so glad that severus was there to guide harry through the maze of corridors and harry quizzing severus under veriterserum was amusing, i wonder who severus followed, my guess would be voldemort as he has to be seen to trust him, i hope severus finds out what umbridge is up to
Title: Chapter 10 23 Jan 2008 2:25 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    YES! Another great chapter, it was very good. I'm SO glad you updated! PLEASE post agian soon! I'm very curious as to what'll happen next. hehe, Harry made me luagh when he was talking with his mouth full ^_^ he sounded silly.
Title: Chapter 10 23 Jan 2008 2:09 am
Reviewer: Tigress93 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm still happy to beta. You should be able to get my email out of my profile.

    Okay, nice chapter! You've got a bit of suspense going now, (not that you didn't before, but...it's back!) which is nice. Too bad about Dumbledore. I was hoping he'd stick around a bit.

    I like the way you have characterized Sirius. It's very believeable that he would jump down Snape's throat at the first mention of detention. His comment about not being able to cook was also a nice details. Small things that add interest to your story.

    The only critique I have is that the kids seemed a bit...meek, around Umbridge. You might have made them give in just a bit too easily. These are mostly Gryffindors, and I can't see them just turning their friend in, just like that.

    I'm glad you got over your writer's block, because this is (another) great chapter. Waiting for your next update. Feel free to email me when you want me to beta.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you new beta!

     

    Yeah, they didnt give him up that easily. Stubbern Gryffindors,....anyway, you'll find out about the fall of the DA in later chapters. =D

Title: Chapter 10 22 Jan 2008 6:17 pm
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been waiting for this story to be updated. Great chapter! :) I noticed this story not long ago and I just couldn't stop reading. I love your Snape and your Harry, they are very cannon. Keep up the great work :)

    Author's Response: Canon! Woo! thank you. I'm glad people like my story. =D
Title: Chapter 10 22 Jan 2008 8:17 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Glad to see they made it out of Umbridge's grasp. I'm curious though to see how Snape will explain Harry's sudden absence. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to reading more soon!
Title: Chapter 10 22 Jan 2008 7:36 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, yay for Sirius! And Snape too, for rescuing Harry. But what of Harry's friends? Oh no!

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