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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
Title: Chapter 8 27 Oct 2007 5:11 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are spelling legilimency incorrectly...it is not legitimates. A good source is the HP Lexicon. They have a Spell and Potion index. Otherwise the story is interesting but to continue down the corridor both should have had to take the Veritaserum. Perhaps then Snape could have let go some of his prejudices.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Oct 2007 12:12 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I really liked how Harry struggled to admit he asked Snape if he was a vampire. I know I certainly wouldn't have the guts to say that to Snape. :)
Title: Chapter 7 25 Oct 2007 5:28 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why didn't he go for the obvious and ask why Snape seemed to hate him? Very good so far, hope you update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Because that was the obvious. I am not obvious, i like to keep people wanting to kill me because of the cliff hangers. ^_^

    Suspense is our friend.

Title: Chapter 7 08 Oct 2007 11:48 pm
Reviewer: wolfsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    My word! So cool!
    I wish that one of the questions that Harry asked was "Do you like ME, as a son of Lily's?"

    Author's Response: .....Awwwww! that would have been a perfect question!!! You should have sent me that! *sobs uncontrolably*
Title: Chapter 7 07 Oct 2007 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo! Great chapter! I really like Snape at the end of this chaper, how he was shocked, but then he was a little gentler, and the had some fear. Nice job with expressing the emotions there.

    I find Harry in character, and it's very interesting to see how this Snape acts around him. Great job! thank you for updating!
Title: Chapter 6- An unexpected surprise... 07 Oct 2007 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! great chapter! I liked tthe test of loyalties and how Harry was blindfolded and just had to trust Snape. The baisin of Veritaserum was a nice touch.
Title: Chapter 7 07 Oct 2007 2:45 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad Harry didn't ask anything too personal although even if he did, Snape would probably read his mind and figure it all out. Keep up the good writing!
Title: Chapter 6- An unexpected surprise... 31 Aug 2007 2:11 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice twist with the Veritaserum. Good chapter and hopefully another one soon!
Title: Chapter 6- An unexpected surprise... 30 Aug 2007 7:34 am
Reviewer: Nicole (Signed) [Report This]
    How can you leave a cliff here? Cruel! Update soon please.
Title: Chapter 5 28 Aug 2007 1:58 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update soon!!!

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