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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
You have a couple of missing spaces and paragraph breaks between speaking. Your characters are very entertaining. I liked how Harry wanted to just take the same way they did the previous times, what a boy. :P Thanks for the update! :) Author's Response: Ya i just kinda copied and pasted it from my computer, since i couldn't upload it. i got most of them out. gad you enjoyed it!
I beta my own story which is not on this website. ttyl smellycat Author's Response: Oh thank you! bUT i already have a Beta Reader. Sorry. Bu thank you.
Please update soon! I haven't came across a fic like this in a while. ttyl smelly cat
cliffhanger! I LOVE cliffhangers an long as there is another chapter to read which there is! ttyl smelly cat
and how you ended this chapter. I hope the next chapter is longer though. I though you played Harry and Ron wonderfuly. I will be waiting for more! ttyl smelly cat
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