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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
Title: Chapter 5 26 Aug 2007 9:41 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another good chapter! :)
Title: Chapter 5 26 Aug 2007 6:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, so Harry's mum was a test too. That's kind of scary.

    You have a couple of missing spaces and paragraph breaks between speaking.

    Your characters are very entertaining. I liked how Harry wanted to just take the same way they did the previous times, what a boy. :P Thanks for the update! :)

    Author's Response:

    Ya i just kinda copied and pasted it from my computer, since i couldn't upload it. i got most of them out.

    gad you enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 4 21 Aug 2007 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I would LOVE to be your beta reader! I can't say that I am great at it but I am decent.
    I beta my own story which is not on this website.
    ttyl
    smellycat

    Author's Response: Oh thank you! bUT i already have a Beta Reader. Sorry. Bu thank you.
Title: Chapter 3 21 Aug 2007 10:13 pm
Reviewer: A smelly cat loves this fic! (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this fic! lol
    Please update soon! I haven't came across a fic like this in a while.
    ttyl
    smelly cat
Title: Actually into the Labarinth 21 Aug 2007 10:07 pm
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhhhhggg!
    cliffhanger!
    I LOVE cliffhangers an long as there is another chapter to read which there is!
    ttyl
    smelly cat
Title: Chapter 1 21 Aug 2007 9:44 pm
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked how you started this fic!
    and how you ended this chapter.
    I hope the next chapter is longer though.
    I though you played Harry and Ron wonderfuly.
    I will be waiting for more!
    ttyl
    smelly cat
Title: Chapter 4 21 Aug 2007 12:29 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter! Hope you can update soon!!!
Title: Chapter 4 20 Aug 2007 10:35 pm
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting idea for a story! Creative! I went on fanfiction.net, and saw your story there as well, with an additional chapter to it. The potion is spelled wrong though. It's veritaserum. I wouldn't mind being a beta for you. Let me know how much work it would entail, as I am a second year college students. However, I enjoy proofreading stories and giving suggestions when they are asked for. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Title: Chapter 4 20 Aug 2007 10:53 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love your ideas. This is getting pretty good. What a way to learn about each other!
Title: Chapter 4 20 Aug 2007 10:34 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Your chapters have improved a bit since the beginning. :)

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