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Reviews For Into the Labyrinth
Title: Chapter 4 20 Aug 2007 9:36 am
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    I just stumbled upon your story. Interesting beginning! I'm curious to know what happens as they continue through the labyrinth...and what temptations might be in store for Snape! :)
Title: Chapter 3 20 Aug 2007 7:01 am
Reviewer: Nicole (Signed) [Report This]
    It's interesting. Update soon.
Title: Chapter 3 20 Aug 2007 12:10 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I'm not sure how you can go about getting a beta reader. For my story, someone just volunteered. So maybe just leave a note at the end of your next chapter asking if anyone wants to.
Title: Actually into the Labarinth 19 Aug 2007 5:34 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome! Interesting story!! Hope you can update soon!!!
Title: Actually into the Labarinth 19 Aug 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Now the mystery begins...
Title: Chapter 1 19 Aug 2007 2:41 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Not a bad start. I would suggest getting a beta reader though to fix errors like this-

    "Ya were good" It should be something like "Yeah, we're good".

    Author's Response: How do I get a beta reader?
Title: Chapter 1 18 Aug 2007 10:12 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    It looks like you have a good idea, here. I can't wait to see what you do with it.

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