Good chapter! Hope you can update again soon!
It's going well. I can see it's going to be a lot of fun following this story.
Wow! That was a quick intake. So Severus isn't going to be as accomodating as we thought he would. You'd think he would at the very least, help Harry contact Dumbledore. After all, Harry is probably extremely unsure and confused about the events that are going on. However, I understand also that Severus wouldn't want to lose Harry so suddenly, after he just got him back, albeit a different Harry. Very good job with staying in the timeline. I'm so used to reading fanfics that take place after 5th year, with Sirius having died. For a second I was like...why does Harry not know who Sirius was...then I mentally slapped my forehead, and said duh! This is a fic previous to third year. lol. I also liked the fact that Snape...oops Severus made sure that Harry ate. Very heartwarming. Anyway, I'm excited to find out what will happen next. Hope you'll update soon!
Fast update! yay I like your Snape, he's funny lol. Keeping Harry. But if I were Snape, I wouldn't want to let my son go either.
Okay, so this is my review of the first three chapters. I think this story is really interesting, and you've taken a Severus-is-Harry's-father route that I haven't seen before. I end each chapter feeling curious and a little befuddled, but that's a GOOD thing, because that's exactly how Harry seems to feel in this story. I think you're doing really well so far! Hope you are able to update again soon :)
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