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Reviews For Sons of Reproach
Author's Response: Oh, yes. Very fun to write... but I wouldn't want to be in the Dursleys' shoes just then! :D
i loved, loved, loved the scene where harry is looking for his wand, and then Snape just marches off as if going to war! Fantastic! It's really cute how concerned Harry is that Snape not go off and get himself into trouble. i love how Snape just sent Harry back with the portkey. Very nice description there. Your writing has improved so much from chapter 1! Great chapter! Author's Response: Yes, he'll notice it, but then he second-guesses himself since the whole situation is still new to him, too. They're both starting to get a little protective of the other, even though they're not quite admitting it even to themselves yet. And thanks so much for saying my writing is improving -- that's really the best compliment any writer can ever get. |
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