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Title: Ponderings and Planning 18 Nov 2007 6:55 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the lip twitch!! >

    Author's Response: Heh, thanks. Severus Snape certainly isn't going to grin and burst into song and dance any time soon, but yes, he's definitely starting to betray hints of amusement. :D
Title: Ponderings and Planning 02 Sep 2007 11:08 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter, I really enjoyed it. It'll certainly be interesting when Snape takes Harry to see where Lily used to live. I also like the way Harry is changing in Snape's eyes. It's a bit fast, but still believable enough.

    Some typos:

    "off his face as he overlong sleeve" (the)

    "hand-me-downs frmo a conceited swine" (from)

    "clothes that are evry much like a" (every)

    Author's Response: Ah, thanks for pointing those out for me -- all the easier to fix now. The typos conspire to mess with me sometimes, I think. :P

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