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Reviews For Sons of Reproach
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Jul 2008 7:33 am
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You wrote "It was two and a half more days before Severus's potion was completed." I think you meant two and a half more hours.

    Author's Response: Someone else pointed this out, too; but no, I did mean days. I suppose I should have been more concise with my description of what passed in that space of time. I'll probably edit that when I get around to going through these chapters with my fine-toothed comb. ;)
Title: The Haunting Shadows 18 Nov 2007 7:45 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks! Encouragement always psyches you up for writing some more. ^_^
Title: The Haunting Shadows 03 Sep 2007 12:02 am
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Please continue this asap. Loved this. Thanks

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm already planning out future chapters -- I just have to find time to write them. XD I'm glad you like the story so far!
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Sep 2007 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying how bits from the books are coming through, even though the storyline is obviously different now. Good chapter.

    Typos:

    "It was two and a half more days" (from the rest of the sentence, I think you mean HOURS)

    "But now imagse were passing through his mind" (images)

    "There must not hav ebeen anywhere else for you to go" (have been)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the typo-spotting help, as always. The last two are right, but no, I did mean two and a half days. Maybe I should add in an extra line to clarify if it seems unclear, though. Thank you again, especially for saying you liked the chapter!
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Sep 2007 7:56 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You've got a nice story here. You've incorporated the new info from book seven rather nicely. I look forward to seeing what you do with this fresh start.

    Author's Response: Thank you for saying so -- I do try to keep it flowing well and use all the info we have... And maybe tweak things some, too, but do it in such a way that it seems more natural.
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Sep 2007 6:11 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I loved the visit. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know where that idea came from, really, I just got to thinking about how amusing it would be and couldn't resist. XD

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