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Reviews For Sons of Reproach
Author's Response: Someone else pointed this out, too; but no, I did mean days. I suppose I should have been more concise with my description of what passed in that space of time. I'll probably edit that when I get around to going through these chapters with my fine-toothed comb. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! Encouragement always psyches you up for writing some more. ^_^
Author's Response: Oh, I'm already planning out future chapters -- I just have to find time to write them. XD I'm glad you like the story so far!
Typos: "It was two and a half more days" (from the rest of the sentence, I think you mean HOURS) "But now imagse were passing through his mind" (images) "There must not hav ebeen anywhere else for you to go" (have been) Author's Response: Thanks for the typo-spotting help, as always. The last two are right, but no, I did mean two and a half days. Maybe I should add in an extra line to clarify if it seems unclear, though. Thank you again, especially for saying you liked the chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so -- I do try to keep it flowing well and use all the info we have... And maybe tweak things some, too, but do it in such a way that it seems more natural.
Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know where that idea came from, really, I just got to thinking about how amusing it would be and couldn't resist. XD |
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