Hope you will continue with this story as you arr doing s great job.
| Title: Repercussions
| 15 Apr 2009 6:24 pm
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| Reviewer: kim (Anonymous)
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like the story hope you wil upload soon
| Title: Repercussions
| 23 Oct 2008 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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I've just discovered your story and I really like it. update soon please, I want to know how Harry's relationship with Severus will evolve now that they are back at Hogwarts.
thats a rotten way to leave this, you know. Horrible, even.
But awesome chapter though. VEry well done
Seems Snape is having some confusing thoughts/feelings. He sure let the boys know he was displeased though, Ron made me laugh, he was so horrified! Poor Harry, he's worried about where things stand between him and the professor.
Hope to read more soon! Please post again when you can.
Author's Response: I'm working on chap thirteen now, so with any luck I'll have time to complete it this weekend or next. HOPEFULLY. I do have a chemistry test on Monday and an assignment due on Tuesday, but we'll just see how it goes. ^_^
| Title: Repercussions
| 31 Aug 2008 5:09 am
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| Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous)
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it would change everything, obviously. hehe. please update soon!
Author's Response: Heh, exactly. >=D I'm writing now, so just as soon as I have time to finish it, there will be an update.
I absolutely love this story. I love how Snape is coming to his conclusions about his feelings at about the same time that Harry is doing the same thing. Both are very realist. It's wonderful to see this updated.
Author's Response: Realism is what I'm going for -- a nice, smooth sort of transition between canon and fanfiction. I'm glad you think it's working! ^_^
| Title: Repercussions
| 24 Aug 2008 4:59 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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VEry good story. This is the first time I have seen it. You've giving things a new twist. Again, very nice and very well written. I hope you continue with it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved this review because that's exactly what I'm trying to do at the moment. ^_^ And I'm writing now, so no worries!
Good story line and plot keep it up
Author's Response: Thanks, and I shall! :D
| Title: Repercussions
| 23 Aug 2008 10:10 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Signed)
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Glad to see this story back on, it’s really a good one. I love the growing relationship between Harry and Sev; right now Harry may see Sev as someone who took good care of him but not yet an uncle or even a father figure. I think the worry that Sev would have experienced when Harry was "missing" from the train and worse when he thinks of what may have happened with the Whomping Willow I think that Sev's view of Harry will change. Sev may soon realise that he cares much more for Harry than he ever thought - like a father caring for his son. A father is what Harry needs and Sev should step up to the task.
Sev must have a "talk" with Harry as soon as possible I would say the next day - Sev should give Harry his own punishment regardless of the schools punishment (I note that you don't have a CP warning but I think that it would be appropriate - but your story), by doing this it would make Harry realise that Sev is willing to be much more than a teacher to him and that he could look to the man to be a parent someone who would look out for him have his best interest at heart, protect him and discipline him when needed.
Author's Response: Wow, this is such an awesome review! And a lot of speculation and suggestion, I like it. ^_^ I can't really tell you what's planned for the next chap, but don't worry, I'm already writing it. XD
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