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Reviews For Sons of Reproach
Author's Response: Someone else pointed this out, too; but no, I did mean days. I suppose I should have been more concise with my description of what passed in that space of time. I'll probably edit that when I get around to going through these chapters with my fine-toothed comb. ;)
Author's Response: Oh, no, I'm updating. Actually, I'm writing the next chap now. XD In between replying to reviews, anyway...
Author's Response: ... I always blamed Ron. XD But yeah.. that's just me. :P
Author's Response: The canon is obviously important, or else I wouldn't try so hard to keep in-character and everything, but I'm also trying not to make it the central focus of the story, either, so the story is more original. I'm glad you liked the letter! Heh, and sarcasm. Sarcasm is my forte. XD But I'm working on the next chap now, so hopefully it won't be long until then, schedule permitting...
I have always thought the idea that Harry and Ron just had to take the car to Hogwarts was dumb. All they had to do was wait until Ron's parents came out and they would handle things. Severus is going to have a fit when he sees what those two have done. Thank you for a great chapter Author's Response: Oh, I know! That's one of those scenes where you just want to bang your head and yell 'YOU IDIOTS!' ... Or, at least, I did. I mean, I was ten when I read CoS, and if I could think of that, I was flabbergasted that they couldn't. XD You're quite welcome -- and thank you for an awesome review! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! XD I'm trying hard to keep his character even while shifting his point of view gradually. Hopefully it's working like I want it to.
Author's Response: I really like the history of Severus and Lily and their doomed friendship, so I just had to put in some little reminder there before Harry left for school. I'm glad you thought it was a good idea! ^_^
Author's Response: Ahh, I can't tell you what it is yet... But it should come in in a few chapters, so just keep reading! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, and no worries. I'm about half done with the next chapter now.
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to keep it to where it makes more sense than just a sudden change of idea (even though that's what has to happen eventually anyway in these kinds of stories) so that it doesn't sound as abrupt and unbelievable. I'm actually trying to break away from the canon a little so that it isn't just a retelling of exactly the same story we all know, but I'm finding that it's going to have to be done in gradual steps just like everything else. I hope you keep reading, though! |
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