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Reviews For Sons of Reproach
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Jul 2008 7:33 am
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You wrote "It was two and a half more days before Severus's potion was completed." I think you meant two and a half more hours.

    Author's Response: Someone else pointed this out, too; but no, I did mean days. I suppose I should have been more concise with my description of what passed in that space of time. I'll probably edit that when I get around to going through these chapters with my fine-toothed comb. ;)
Title: The Journey to Hogwarts 26 Jun 2008 11:28 pm
Reviewer: darkwish (Signed) [Report This]
    Will you be updating or is this story abandoned? I'd really like to read more.

    Author's Response: Oh, no, I'm updating. Actually, I'm writing the next chap now. XD In between replying to reviews, anyway...
Title: The Journey to Hogwarts 15 Mar 2008 10:28 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry will be in so much trouble, even though its not entirely his fault, keep writing

    Author's Response: ... I always blamed Ron. XD But yeah.. that's just me. :P
Title: The Journey to Hogwarts 08 Mar 2008 2:00 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so happy you finally updated! I was quite upset, thinking you abandoned it, so you can imagine my happiness at spotting your update. This story is loads of fun to read, I really like how you alter cannon events so that they are included in the story. Great work, I enjoyed the sarcasim and humor greatly, and that latter from Lily was quite interesting. PLEASE post again soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next.

    Author's Response: The canon is obviously important, or else I wouldn't try so hard to keep in-character and everything, but I'm also trying not to make it the central focus of the story, either, so the story is more original. I'm glad you liked the letter! Heh, and sarcasm. Sarcasm is my forte. XD But I'm working on the next chap now, so hopefully it won't be long until then, schedule permitting...
Title: The Journey to Hogwarts 07 Mar 2008 7:50 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yea!! I love how Harry and Severus are coming together.

    I have always thought the idea that Harry and Ron just had to take the car to Hogwarts was dumb. All they had to do was wait until Ron's parents came out and they would handle things.

    Severus is going to have a fit when he sees what those two have done.

    Thank you for a great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I know! That's one of those scenes where you just want to bang your head and yell 'YOU IDIOTS!' ... Or, at least, I did. I mean, I was ten when I read CoS, and if I could think of that, I was flabbergasted that they couldn't. XD

    You're quite welcome -- and thank you for an awesome review! ^_^

Title: The Journey to Hogwarts 07 Mar 2008 1:17 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story's great - I really like the way Severus is acting xD

    Author's Response: Thanks! XD I'm trying hard to keep his character even while shifting his point of view gradually. Hopefully it's working like I want it to.
Title: The Journey to Hogwarts 07 Mar 2008 6:02 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Thanks for the update. Very excited to see that. Great chapter. Poor Harry, all conflicted about how things will be different and I loved the letter from Lily. And oh dear, Snape is going be livid. Poor Harry. *shivers*

    Author's Response: I really like the history of Severus and Lily and their doomed friendship, so I just had to put in some little reminder there before Harry left for school. I'm glad you thought it was a good idea! ^_^
Title: The Glowing Cauldron 25 Feb 2008 3:43 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is good so far, snape seems to be concerned about harry and like harry i want to know what the potion is and what is it for, is snapes mission (can't think of a better word) to kill harry, so the potion could be a antidote or something, well thats my guess anyway

    Author's Response: Ahh, I can't tell you what it is yet... But it should come in in a few chapters, so just keep reading! ;)
Title: The Glowing Cauldron 30 Nov 2007 4:43 pm
Reviewer: snakechild (Signed) [Report This]
    great story update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks, and no worries. I'm about half done with the next chapter now.
Title: The Glowing Cauldron 29 Nov 2007 9:14 pm
Reviewer: yitaply (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Quite an interesting story. I want to see where you'll take this but you have a way of sticking fairly close to canon and making everything feel real.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I try to keep it to where it makes more sense than just a sudden change of idea (even though that's what has to happen eventually anyway in these kinds of stories) so that it doesn't sound as abrupt and unbelievable. I'm actually trying to break away from the canon a little so that it isn't just a retelling of exactly the same story we all know, but I'm finding that it's going to have to be done in gradual steps just like everything else. I hope you keep reading, though!

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