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Reviews For Sons of Reproach
Author's Response: Thanks! Future chapters may be a little slower in coming, I'm not sure, but I'll try my best to have them out on a reasonable schedule.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm already planning out future chapters -- I just have to find time to write them. XD I'm glad you like the story so far!
Typos: "It was two and a half more days" (from the rest of the sentence, I think you mean HOURS) "But now imagse were passing through his mind" (images) "There must not hav ebeen anywhere else for you to go" (have been) Author's Response: Thanks for the typo-spotting help, as always. The last two are right, but no, I did mean two and a half days. Maybe I should add in an extra line to clarify if it seems unclear, though. Thank you again, especially for saying you liked the chapter!
Some typos: "off his face as he overlong sleeve" (the) "hand-me-downs frmo a conceited swine" (from) "clothes that are evry much like a" (every) Author's Response: Ah, thanks for pointing those out for me -- all the easier to fix now. The typos conspire to mess with me sometimes, I think. :P
Author's Response: Yes, that's very true. But even from the vantage point of a twelve-year-old boy, you can undoubtedly see that there isn't too much worse that could happen by going with Severus. Or certainly not too much worse that he could think of at the moment.
I can't wait to see where Snape takes Harry. Author's Response: Ah, my chapters tend to be long -- probably because I tend to ramble. XD But I'm glad you're enjoying reading it so far. It's always great to hear people like your work.
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so -- I do try to keep it flowing well and use all the info we have... And maybe tweak things some, too, but do it in such a way that it seems more natural.
Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know where that idea came from, really, I just got to thinking about how amusing it would be and couldn't resist. XD
Author's Response: I have the base plotline for at least the next two chapters already laid out, so no worries there. As soon as I have time to put them together in story form, I'll have them up. Severus is a pretty awesome character, he's one of my favorites. :)
Author's Response: The next chapter is already in the works. Thanks for the enthusiasm, it always gives a writer a boost to know there are people looking forward to the next installment. ^_^ |
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