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Title: Up The Chimney And Back Again 11 Sep 2007 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Ethan Thorn (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story i cant wait to read the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks! Future chapters may be a little slower in coming, I'm not sure, but I'll try my best to have them out on a reasonable schedule.
Title: The Haunting Shadows 03 Sep 2007 12:02 am
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Please continue this asap. Loved this. Thanks

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm already planning out future chapters -- I just have to find time to write them. XD I'm glad you like the story so far!
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Sep 2007 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying how bits from the books are coming through, even though the storyline is obviously different now. Good chapter.

    Typos:

    "It was two and a half more days" (from the rest of the sentence, I think you mean HOURS)

    "But now imagse were passing through his mind" (images)

    "There must not hav ebeen anywhere else for you to go" (have been)

    Author's Response: Thanks for the typo-spotting help, as always. The last two are right, but no, I did mean two and a half days. Maybe I should add in an extra line to clarify if it seems unclear, though. Thank you again, especially for saying you liked the chapter!
Title: Ponderings and Planning 02 Sep 2007 11:08 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter, I really enjoyed it. It'll certainly be interesting when Snape takes Harry to see where Lily used to live. I also like the way Harry is changing in Snape's eyes. It's a bit fast, but still believable enough.

    Some typos:

    "off his face as he overlong sleeve" (the)

    "hand-me-downs frmo a conceited swine" (from)

    "clothes that are evry much like a" (every)

    Author's Response: Ah, thanks for pointing those out for me -- all the easier to fix now. The typos conspire to mess with me sometimes, I think. :P
Title: The Hand of Fate 02 Sep 2007 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    What an awful choice for Harry to have to make. At least he knows what's good for him. :-) I would have been surprised if he had chosen what he knows (Dursleys) rather than the unknown.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's very true. But even from the vantage point of a twelve-year-old boy, you can undoubtedly see that there isn't too much worse that could happen by going with Severus. Or certainly not too much worse that he could think of at the moment.
Title: Whispers and Warnings 02 Sep 2007 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start, and a nice long chapter. Good job.

    I can't wait to see where Snape takes Harry.

    Author's Response: Ah, my chapters tend to be long -- probably because I tend to ramble. XD But I'm glad you're enjoying reading it so far. It's always great to hear people like your work.
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Sep 2007 7:56 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You've got a nice story here. You've incorporated the new info from book seven rather nicely. I look forward to seeing what you do with this fresh start.

    Author's Response: Thank you for saying so -- I do try to keep it flowing well and use all the info we have... And maybe tweak things some, too, but do it in such a way that it seems more natural.
Title: The Haunting Shadows 02 Sep 2007 6:11 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I loved the visit. Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know where that idea came from, really, I just got to thinking about how amusing it would be and couldn't resist. XD
Title: To Have Loved And Lost 01 Sep 2007 7:48 am
Reviewer: padfoot (Anonymous) [Report This]
    that was sooooooooooo cool. i like snape i think hes cool. so plezz make more chapters.

    Author's Response: I have the base plotline for at least the next two chapters already laid out, so no worries there. As soon as I have time to put them together in story form, I'll have them up. Severus is a pretty awesome character, he's one of my favorites. :)
Title: To Have Loved And Lost 01 Sep 2007 6:01 am
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward with great anticipation to your next continuance. Thanks

    Author's Response: The next chapter is already in the works. Thanks for the enthusiasm, it always gives a writer a boost to know there are people looking forward to the next installment. ^_^

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