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Title: Chapter 3 30 Aug 2009 2:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! Snape and Harry's minds connected? Great!

    I hope that they can find him before they kill him, or torture him.

    Fantastic chapter Kristeh. I'm scared for Harry though.
Title: Chapter 3 04 Jun 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus to the rescue! I'm so gleeful, lol. I love the way you write, very exciting. I loved reading about the Order even though it was just a little bit about them.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Action scenes are harder for me so I'm really glad you liked this part! 
Title: Chapter 3 05 Mar 2008 1:03 pm
Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus thought, letting his fear morph into anger because anger was easier to bear. -- very nice.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 11 Oct 2007 3:19 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I wasn't expecting that! Great chapter! *grin*
Title: Chapter 3 11 Sep 2007 6:59 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Great chapter! Poor, poor Harry! I hope that someone saves him! I wonder how Harry connected his mind to Snape's. I really enjoyed Snape's thoughts at the beginning of this chapter.

    Well done! Now I have to eagerly wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Jan!  Poor Harry indeed.  I think he's got a rough year ahead of him, although I think he would say it was worth it in the end.  As for the mind connection, there is a reason for it, although I'm not sure how good a reason it really is, and it will left rather vague for a time.  Glad you liked Snapey!
Title: Chapter 3 09 Sep 2007 2:09 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! PLease update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I will try to post the next chapter as soon as I can!
Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 6:55 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved this chapter and the build up of tension.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you liked it!
Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 12:37 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the way this story is progressing - your characterisations are great, and you keep the pace and tension at just the right level to keep the reader on their toes! I can't wait to read more! Poor Harry - always dealing with DEs and their sadistic tortures. *huggles him* The mind link with Snape is really interesting, and I really want to see how it will progress! You are doing a wonderful job so far (I also think you did a great job with this chapter, too), please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so, so much!  I have been very nervous about getting into writing again--I wrote a good bit in the SW fandom, but that's been a few years ago, and I wasn't sure at all if I could still write anything worthwhile.  So your kind words are very encouraging for me!

    And yes, poor Harry--he does have it rough, but where would we be without the DEs to provide some action?  And with the DEs, you can continue the story after DH.  After all, Dumbledore said some of them were almost as bad as Voldy himself (and personally, I think I might rather face Voldy than Bellatrix), and some of them are bound to still be on the loose.  

    I'm glad you like the mind link--it will come into play later as well.  Thanks again!   

Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 9:27 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, exciting ending! I loved the mind connection. I can't wait to see Harry rescued. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked the mind connection--I wasn't sure about it, but I thought of a couple of other scenes in the future where the mind connection will come into play again.  I'm quite ambitious and have a whole trilogy planned, lol-- this one, an AU of "Deathly Hallows" with Snape helping Harry, and an AU of the year after DH.  I just hope I haven't bitten off more than I can chew!  
Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 6:36 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    How is it that Snape can tell where Harry is from that temporary connection they just shared? Good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And Snape can tell where Harry is because he recognized the room with the dais and the throne-like chair.  He's been there before at DE meetings.  I'll try to get ch. 4 asap.

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