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Title: Chapter 4 30 Aug 2009 2:19 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I hope that Harry is going to be okay!

    I love how you keep Snape in character. He's still the same grumpy guy we all love. :)

    Great chappie, as usual. :)
Title: Chapter 4 04 Jun 2008 6:09 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Recovery time soon? I hope Harry's not mental, :( That would just be horrible!
    Thank you for writing this story I'm enjoying it muchly, :P

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading!  Recovery time coming up! 
Title: Chapter 4 11 Oct 2007 3:24 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! ^^
Title: Chapter 4 17 Sep 2007 7:02 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Yippee! Severus doesn't have to keep spying in this story. I assume that means he's going to have his hands quite full with helping Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I didn't want Severus to have to keep spying--partly because I don't want that to be a reason for him to try not to become close to Harry, and partly because, as you said, he's going to be busy helping Harry from now on.  
Title: Chapter 4 13 Sep 2007 7:12 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    Oo good story! Very nice begining!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you liked it!
Title: Chapter 4 12 Sep 2007 4:20 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great! Yay for hurt/comfort! I love that all the Weasleys were there and Hermione, for Harry. Sweet. I love the picture of Snape grabbing Harry and apparating out, just as Voldemort was coming into the room. Ha! Take that Voldie! The curse wounds sound bad... I hope they can be healed, but not right away of course. :) Good chapter! Thank you for updating it!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you again, Jan!  I just love hurt/comfort and mush!  And I thought that the Weasleys and Hermione would want to be there for Harry.  Who knows--maybe subconsciously realizing he's safe and with people who love him will keep him from being permanently damaged by the DEs treatment.

    I'm glad you liked the image of Snape holding Harry and Apparating away under Voldemort's nose.  That was one of the images that I had when I first began planning the story, and it just grabbed me and demanded to be written.  And it means Severus' role as a spy is pretty much shot so now he'll have to help the war effort in a new way.

    And yep, the curse wounds will be healed eventually, but not before he's had lots of time to recover in Snape's quarters! 

     

Title: Chapter 4 12 Sep 2007 2:09 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad they got him out of there on time! I hope there's more soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Of course they had to get Harry out on time, or there wouldn't be very much story, but he's still got plenty of adventures ahead--hopefully, more pleasant than being tortured by DEs though!    
Title: Chapter 4 11 Sep 2007 9:33 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I just started this story. Good writing. Snape is very much in character, and the little we've seen of Harry (other than at a distance through Snape's eyes), is IC as well. I'm looking forward to more. Nice start.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you like the characterizations, and it will be more of Harry's POV as the story goes along.
Title: Chapter 4 11 Sep 2007 8:26 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    This fic is pretty amazing! And I am glad that you did not go all gory in your descriptions, just kept to what we truly needed to know to set the situation. You've written this mostly from Snape's POV, which is interesting, as you have shown us how he has been given things to re-evaluate and question. Now, the stage is set and I am very eager to see what will happen next!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, thanks!  I'm really glad you're enjoying it!  I don't think I could write anything really gory--it was hard enough writing that violent scene as it was.  I can hardly bear torture scenes, and prefer to sort skip over them and get on to the recovery, and hurt/comfort parts. 

    Yes, so far the story has been mostly Snape's POV, which I felt was kind of necessary to get the points across that I wanted to in these first chapters.  As the story goes on, I think it will become more through Harry's eyes, but I will alternate POV between the two of them.

Title: Chapter 4 11 Sep 2007 4:56 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I absolutly love this story! I really didn't know what to expect when I started reading, but it has by far surpassed all my expectations! I don't remember, is this a guardian or just mentor fic? I really hope you keep it as mentor, too many good ones start out awesome but then are ruined by Severus adopting Harry and getting all mushy. But your characterization is right on and brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens next. Again, your protrayl of Severus is perfect, but I hope that there's some kind of explination as to why Voldermort didn't contact him...isn't he considered as a part o his "inner circle?" I also hope that you don't let Severus get away from Voldermort with just a slap on the wrist. You said that you didn't like writing this chapter, but it was really good and I hope we get Harry's part of the story soon too!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying the story!  It is a guardian fic, but I debated long and hard about whether it should be guardian or mentor.  I'm glad you liked my characterizations, and I hope you will continue to, but I have to admit I do plan on Severus and Harry becoming close.  I love mush, I just can't help it!  Severus will not officially adopt Harry or become his legal guardian, but they will both come to see Severus as a protector and guardian figure.  Although I suppose the mentor category would have worked too, as they will work together and learn from one another.

    There is a reason why Voldemort didn't contact Severus when Harry was captured, and I will touch on it in the next chapter, or possibly chapter 6.  Thanks again!


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