Oh boy. Good chapter but... couldn't you have saved Harry before signing off? I mean, sure he's home now but ... I guess I'll head to the Great Hall with the others for something to eat while we wait...
Author's Response: Sorry for leaving you hanging about Harry's condition, but the next couple of chapters will deal more with his recovery. Tell Ron and Hermione 'hello' for me if you see them in the Great Hall. And thank you!
Ooooh wow! :) I really, really liked this chapter! So early into the story, and already you have so much action! That's excellent! I loved how the Order rescued Harry, and I loved how Snape took Harry to his rooms for treatment! And the scene with Harry's friends was very touching, and beautifully written, too! Keep up the great work - I look forward to the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you liked it! Action sequences are hard for me, and I'm dancing with joy at the knowledge that you enjoyed it. I enjoy writing mushy scenes much more so that's something I have to watch out for. I wanted Harry to have to recover in Snape's quarters because it's so much easier for them to get to know one another with that enforced contact. Chapter 5 will probably be up this weekend. Thankyou again!
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