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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Potions Professor
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted Fleur to be more than a pretty face. If she was her school's champion it only makes sense for her to have some brains and talent, too. But I can see why she could be considered a Mary Sue, too. It almost makes her too perfect. But since she's a very minor character here, I decided maybe it didn't matter.
Good job Severus! He was definatly awesome in this chapter and I liked that you showed him when he wasn't at his strongest, it makes him seem more prone to mistakes, which allows us to blame him for Harry's kidnapping easier. Even though it truly wasn't his fault...but I enjoyed the battle going on in Severus' head as well, when he was trying to decide who to blame. You explained his absence from being able to engage in the tourture of Harry well too, I hope Voldermort dosen't have anything in mind for Severus...but then again, it could make things interesting later on if Harry has to save him from Voldermort in order to feel even with Snape and for all he's done for him. I'm sure whatever you write will be perfect, as you already have written it...I need to catch up, so if you'll excuse me.. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I don't blame Severus for the kidnapping, but I thought if he feels a little bit responsible it might help him begin to see Harry in a different light. And I wanted Severus to be done with spying, so it made sense to me to have Voldemort begin to be suspicious of him, and it could be interesting if Harry later saves Severus, couldn't it? Thanks again!
Poor Harry! That boy really has been through so much! I can't wait to see how he reacts to everything when he wakes up - at least he's surrounded by friends and family who care about him! (Snape - soon you're gonna be one of those "wrapped around his finger" too!) Your Snape's POV is also very well-written, and McGonagall was delightful to read in this chapter, too! Keep up the great work, and please update soon - I can't wait to read the next part!!! Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like the characterizations. We won't see too much more of Fleur, but her potions skills will come in handy in the future, too. And I know, poor Harry, but he's been through the worst now so things will get better for him. And Snape would have a fit if he heard you say that--I wonder how he did at Divination...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it! Hopefully, chapter 6 will be done within a week.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so happy you like it! I'm working on chapter 6, but I'm pretty busy during the week so I may not get it finished until the weekend.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I agree about Fleur. She's so dazzingly beautiful that it's like that all that's ever mentioned about her. I do think she'd be pretty talented, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was playing around with chapter 6 tonight, deciding how Harry will awaken. He'll definitely be surprised to find himself in Snape's bedroom!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Snape's reaction. It's kind of ironic that he's hurt and insulted by Dumbledore telling him not to use that information against Harry. I know the Severus in my story wouldn't taunt Harry about child abuse, but I can see why Dumbledore might not be as sure and feels the need to caution him. |
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