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Title: Chapter 6 30 Aug 2009 5:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry.

    It must be so confusing for him.

    Great chappie, and I love that Severus is finally beginning to see Harry differently.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for all these lovely reviews, Pandora!  Glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 6 05 Jun 2008 12:16 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful chapter. I love that Harry is awake. It's cute how Severus isstarting to see Harry differently but pretending not to, lol. Boys will be boys I guess, they never change. :) Great story.

    Author's Response: Yes, Severus does have a hard time admitting he was wrong.  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 6 19 Nov 2007 3:58 am
Reviewer: ladywatts (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story. Great writing! Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 6 11 Oct 2007 3:39 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! :D
Title: Chapter 6 24 Sep 2007 10:53 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this sacrificing part of Harry that wasn't really exploited that much by J.K. Rowling. But, it truly suits Harry in your fic and I love that you've includid it here. I hope that it dosen't get too out of hand, though.

    I can't wait for the scene where Ron and Hermione demand to talk to Harry and find out that he's distancing himself from them. It's always so touching to hear from them that they'll never leave Harry's side because they're friends and a team and marked for death by Voldermort already.

    So, are you planning on having Dumbldore taking Harry out horcurx-hunting or is the headmaster off on some other personal mission? (I guess you've also got to get through the rest of the summer too!)

    Really good story, though and I can't wait until the next chapter is up!! (Can't wait for some Snape/Harry interaction!)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again!  Harry does have a willingness to sacrifice his own desires if he thinks it would be better for others (canon Harry breaking up with Ginny so she wouldn't be in danger comes to mind), and after Sirius' death and especially after his own kidnapping, I do believe that Harry would think that the best way to protect his friends is to break things off with them.  The other side of this, though, is that people have a right to decide for themselves if they're willing to be in danger, and Ron and Hermione love Harry enough that they're willing to take the risk.  It's also a bit late for all that now.  It's not exactly a secret who Harry's closest friends are.  But I agree that the Trio's friendship is a beautiful thing, and I love them all.

    Oh, and Dumbledore will take Harry and Severus off to the cave for the locket horcrux at the end of the story.  Hmm, I guess that was a spoiler for my own story, huh?  But I did say I want to write a Deathly Hallows AU, too, where Severus is helping Harry and Co. destroy the horcruxes so maybe it's not too much of a spoiler.

Title: Chapter 6 23 Sep 2007 9:59 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Explain more about the mental connection please. And why does Harry always forgive Dumbledore for the Dursleys' abuse?

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!  It's always great to hear from readers!  And I will explain more about the mental connection later!  As for Harry and Dumbledore, they may talk more about the Dursleys later, as well.
Title: Chapter 6 23 Sep 2007 7:03 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I think Snape was well-written in this chapter becuase he was still snarky and yet somewhat caring in the beginning. I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked Snape!  It's so hard to be patient because there are several scenes with him and Harry that I'm so anxious to get to, but I have to try not to rush it.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 6 21 Sep 2007 10:34 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. After everything he's endured from Snape he now has to live in his bed and rooms for weeks. It just isn't something I can see him handling well at all. I don't blame him a bit for worrying about how it's going to work out. And Harry's giving up his friends? Oh boy, he's got a hard time ahead of him. Good story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes,  Harry's not too pleased about staying with Snape right now, but it's the only way I could think of to have them become closer.  It's going to be hard to overcome the past if they don't spend some time getting to know one another.  And don't worry about Ron and Hermione--they have no intentions of letting Harry give up on them.  
Title: Chapter 6 21 Sep 2007 9:51 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no - don't stop here, I just want to read on! I'm looking forward to more interactions between Snape and Harry :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm looking forward to writing more interaction between Snape and Harry, too!

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